| Title: Her Child
| 04 Jun 2011 6:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Silynara (Anonymous)
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Very Good Story. I love stories were 'Severus' helps 'Harry' without getting angry about his 'Potter' genes.
| Title: Her Child
| 20 May 2011 7:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Shh (Anonymous)
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| Title: Her Child
| 28 Apr 2011 1:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great story! There are a lot of stories of Harry's bathtime but this is the best yet! Thank you so much
very cute and fluffy!! i absolutely adored reading this!! very enjoyable :)
This was a really sweet story. I liked how you made Severus into a man who actually wanted to be a dad, and it was sad that he thought his dream was dead because Lily was gone.
I really liked the way you described the bath part of this, that was super cute. I love bathtime, it was one of my favorite things to do when I babysat my small nieces and nephews. especially when they invented those crazy color paints and silly soaps. I liked the way you described all the toys and wondered if Harry had a favorite. My niece's favorite was a small rainbow rubber dolphin and her brother's was a squishy squid he got from the aquarium.
I do have a question though, did Sev ever heal Harry's face and arm? Maybe I missed that?
Oh and there's a small typo at the end you might want to fix, you have Harry was not longer her child, it should be 'no' longer.
Loved the end and how Harry accepted Severus as his father. Adorable!
| Title: Her Child
| 26 Apr 2011 6:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Vanitas (Anonymous)
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Really disappoint this only a one-shot,may I keep my hope that sometime in distant future you will get the inspiration to write a sequel?Currently I eager for The Forgotten Child and Just a father to update.
Awesome story. Will there be more? :D
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