This was a lovely opening chapter. The setting is so peaceful. I loved the fishing scene, and that they’re digging the wishing well for Ginny. Harry’s future looks bright. Totally lovely chapter.
please update this soon!! I always thought Harry should have gone into quidditch instead of being an auror. :)
Ohhh, please write some more to this story!!!
Are you still working on this or have you let it go?
Author's Response: Still working on it. I never abandon a story. I've just been working on my other unfinished stories as well as one that's not even posted yet. I will finish this one though, just not at the moment. Sorry!
I love your writing, it flows very naturally. Your stories are great, please keep going.
Wow....I truly can't wait to find out just how Ginny will react to the wishing well? Especially in regards to all those that aided Harry; his father Severus, Draco, Ron, Fred and George!
But I must go back and re-read the stry "Letting Go", as its been a long time since I read that story
| Title: A Secret Place
| 08 Jun 2011 6:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Jess4severus (Anonymous)
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Just started reading this and love it, I love the idea of Severus as a granddad... Can't wait for more.
This is awesome and you should totally update soon!
Personally, I think Harry would be foolish to consider playing professional quidditch with Voldiewarts still on the loose. Knowing Voldie's leanings toward terrorist tactics, he wouldn't think twice about blowing up a stadium full of people just to get to Harry. How would Harry feel then, feeling responsible for the deaths of countless innocents? Something to think about. Lovely chapter, btw.
Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, these things will be on Harry's mind, but tehre are also other story pieces that haven't come into play yet that would make this possible or impossible. Thanks for your input!
LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!
Please, please update soon!
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