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Reviews For The Things That Happened
Author's Response: I agree but I don't feel like spending another few chapters leading to trust and then answers, but the more time I spend revising the second chapter, I feel as if I should make him more cruel and less open. Your response just gave me a push in that direction, so I think I'll start a re-write tonight and add the next two chapters as an apology in the delay. So, hang in there and we'll see if you like the re-write better. Thank you for giving me a push. I was going to hold back on the re-write for a few more weeks. Thanks again. -splintered_screams
Can't wait till the net chapter. Author's Response: Haha. And you won't have to wait, I'm working on the second chapter right now. =)
Author's Response: My apologies, as I was writing this I was half asleep. I am glad that you pointed out my mistakes and I apologize that I did not please you with the change of ages.
Author's Response: Hopefully, you will tonight, but that's only if I don't fall asleep.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad it's intriguing to you. I plan on updating tonight. =)
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