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Title: Joining 27 Feb 2015 6:40 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's good to see Severus thinking for himself, both with Lucius and again with Riddle. I think Riddle might get more than he bargained for if Severus decides to join, even though the boy is only 13.
Title: Joining 18 Nov 2012 8:46 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting, will you be writing more?
Title: Joining 24 Dec 2011 12:58 am
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm definitely very intrigued by the beginning of this story...and I can hardly wait to find out just what Severus will decide to do? Will he manage to get away from both Riddle/Voldemort & Lucius's manipulations with his life & soul intact or will he be sucked into the trap!
Title: Joining 23 May 2011 12:06 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start but I'm not sure Tom would have answered questions like this or revealed that he was a half-blood

    Author's Response:

    I agree but I don't feel like spending another few chapters leading to trust and then answers, but the more time I spend revising the second chapter, I feel as if I should make him more cruel and less open. Your response just gave me a push in that direction, so I think I'll start a re-write tonight and add the next two chapters as an apology in the delay. So, hang in there and we'll see if you like the re-write better. Thank you for giving me a push. I was going to hold back on the re-write for a few more weeks.

    Thanks again.

    -splintered_screams

Title: Joining 22 May 2011 2:32 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, this looks very intriguing. I am looking forward to where you're going with it.

    Can't wait till the net chapter.

    Author's Response: Haha. And you won't have to wait, I'm working on the second chapter right now. =)
Title: Joining 21 May 2011 3:25 am
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I don't approve of the changes to the characters' ages. You said "deluded" but I think you meant "diluted".

    Author's Response: My apologies, as I was writing this I was half asleep. I am glad that you pointed out my mistakes and I apologize that I did not please you with the change of ages.
Title: Joining 21 May 2011 1:17 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hmmm Interesting I hope to seee more soon!

    Author's Response: Hopefully, you will tonight, but that's only if I don't fall asleep.
Title: Joining 20 May 2011 7:42 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    I've never read the original story but I do find your beginning intriguing. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. I'm glad it's intriguing to you. I plan on updating tonight. =)

     

    -splintered_screams


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