*loud applause* Lovely story! Will there be a year two? Three? Four... and so on?
| Title: Epilogue: The Cottage
| 14 Jul 2011 3:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Elena (Signed)
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This was so good! I can't wait for Year Two!!!!
Great, this story was great and had me excited like all through it, now I can't wait for story two :) Hope you are a quick write :p
| Title: Prologue: The Cottage
| 10 Jul 2011 12:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Wendy (Anonymous)
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Loved it thanks for writing. read all your stories on ffnet but many were unfinished and the Harry stories appear to have been removed. I am not by any means a great literary critic but even I can see that your writing has improved greatly over the years.
Sev teaching Harry how to knot his tie brought back fond memories of my Dad doing the same before I started grammar school aged 11,(not sure if girls wear ties as part of the uniform in the US but they do here in the UK at some schools). I went to a boarding school which also had day pupils. anyway loking forward to year 2.
Absolutely loved the marriage scene, the bathroom scene (Cheeky Harry, very cheeky!), and the two love birds. I cannot wait to see how year two goes!
I absolutely loved this story. An original action and storyline... I haven't seen many fics with Lily alive :)
Thank you and I wish you good luck with your next stories!
Such a sweet ending to an excellent story! Congratulations!
Aww that was so swet!
I loved the way that both Houses got the Cup and everyone got awarded points. I also liked how everyone's parents were there and they all got rewards and punishments.
The wedding was beautiful. I loved them dancing together as a family. From the many weddings I've attended, dancing in a group is the most fun. Nobody's looking at you directly like they are when you dance with a partner, and everyone is just having a good time. The tarantella is my favorite group dance, you can also do it individually with a partner, but it's the best with a bunch of people to form the circle. It's a traditional Southern Italian dance, I learned it when I was three and it's the only dance I can do without looking like a clumsy idiot.
It's true what they say about redheads, it's even truer what they say about Italian women, they have even worse tempers! And you really don't want to know what a redhaired Italian woman is like when she gets started!
The last line was great, and I loved Severus showing Harry how to tie a tie. That's something I learned how to do watching my brother.
Yay!!! So sweet...Can't wait for year 2!
Aw that was awesomely amazing. I hope that you start the next story soon. This one was pretty brilliant. Although if you eventually kill off Sev...well.... I dont know that I will like that much. Anyways, GREAT JOB!
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