Ahhh. Another amazing chapter. I hope that the next one comes soon... (although, as a writer I know that's not always easy, as a reader I just can't help but say it. Lol) ...I thought this chapter was absolutely brilliant! It was sweet. I am glad that Harry is finally getting to live happy moments. I'm sure there will be family troubles right around the corner though. Hardy does have a knack for disobeying rules and now that he has that invisibility cloak......
I love this story. It's so sweet! Adorable.
| Title: Gifts
| 26 Jun 2011 6:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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| Title: Gifts
| 26 Jun 2011 6:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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You meant to say "their" instead of "they're" when Percy was talking about the twins. You misspelled Aberforth's name. I hope the Brutus Malfoy that you mentioned is a descendant named for the one that is mentioned in Tales of Beedle the Bard, because that one lived in 1675. Grandpa Alby, ha ha! Severus probably will not be pleased with Dumbledore for giving Harry James' invisibility cloak and Harry had better rethink using the cloak to search the Restricted Section. Brilliant chapter! I'm glad that they all had a great Christmas!
As always your work is clear and excellent. I'm sorry I've been neglecting to review this story but I do love it. Please keep updating at this intensity, it's excellent!
| Title: Homework and Hogsmeade
| 22 Jun 2011 2:58 am
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! Can't wait to read about Harry's first Christmas at Hogwarts and with his family!
| Title: Homework and Hogsmeade
| 22 Jun 2011 12:00 am
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Wow! Superb chapter =o) I can't wait for the Christmas day!
Sounds like they had a fun time shopping and everyone will get what they most want for Christmas. Of course the best present is one you can't buy--a family.
I'm glad Dumbledore took discovering Lily's alive as well as he did and also that Severus is Harry's son.
It's good to see that Toby and Sev are getting along. Can't wait to see Christmas and what Ron says about Severus being Harry's dad.
The jewelry sounds beautiful.
Oh, and I've updated Lily's Defender again. Severus finally sees Lily after all those years.
| Title: Homework and Hogsmeade
| 21 Jun 2011 4:54 am
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| Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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I love the new chapter... Alas all the family is coming together... The story line is absolutely superb and I look forward to reading more
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