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Title: Snitch, Snob, and Soon 13 Jun 2011 11:36 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter. Liked how Severus got Harry out of the party, the thoughts Severus had of Lucius, how he realized he owed James and let Harry keep his name to honor James. These were some of the moments I really liked in the chapter. Great flow to the chapter.
Title: Snitch, Snob, and Soon 13 Jun 2011 4:41 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice chapter =o)
    The match was written a little awkwardly but I know how it is hard write some good comments ;) I would kick Malfoy in his family jewels too... And the scene in hospital was really cute =o)
    But I'm curious how will Harry explain the new things to Ron and Hermione. I can see how will Ron throw one big fit of jealousy and Hermione will try to explain to Harry that Severus want him dead. I wouldn't want to be in Harry's place... =o)
Title: Snitch, Snob, and Soon 13 Jun 2011 6:06 am
Reviewer: Twilight1987 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    There isn't a lot that I can say... I mean it was amazing, but all of you chapters have been! Lol. I can't wait to see some more Harry/snape interaction and Lily/snape and Harry/lily.... Ah I can't wait to see everything! Great job!
Title: Snitch, Snob, and Soon 13 Jun 2011 5:53 am
Reviewer: SpicyKittins (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sorry I just kept laughing at "Minerva is too busy with her Ass." it took me a while to figure out the headmistress was attached to the ass. Liking the story! Keep up the good work!
Title: Snitch, Snob, and Soon 13 Jun 2011 5:23 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter Update soon :D
Title: The Unusual Detention 13 Jun 2011 2:57 am
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay! Lily is awake! I'm happy for her and her family =o)
    I'm looking forward the next chapter =o)
Title: The Unusual Detention 12 Jun 2011 5:49 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the new chapters... Sev being Harry's father is great and Lily waking up is just the icing on the cake... I hope you update soon because I can't wait for more.
Title: The Unusual Detention 12 Jun 2011 5:31 pm
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I'm glad that Lily is awake. I look forward to the conversation where Lily gives her reasons for not telling Severus about Harry. Why did you make Lily (and Severus) four years older?

    Author's Response: I've always pictured Severus as being in his mid-thirties...besides, just because they come of age at seventeen in the Wizarding World doesn't actually make them 'grown ups'. I wanted them to be around twenty when they got married and have Harry's first year be fifteen years after that. Does that make sense? Glad you like the story. Please, keep reading.
Title: The Unusual Detention 12 Jun 2011 12:04 pm
Reviewer: Zireael07 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I love Lily waking up and her interactions with others...

    BTW will Malfoy go and blab to his Dad that Lily Potter is alive?

    Author's Response: No--he'd never betray his 'Uncle Sev' like that. At least, not in this story. Lucius will making an appearance very soon, though. Stay tuned. *smirks*
Title: The Unusual Detention 12 Jun 2011 9:20 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Cool!

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