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Reviews For Along Came a Family
Very good portrayal of Severus, too, and I like how he's already noticed that Harry is too thin and not well-cared for. If they're both determined to try to succeed at Occlumency and at least give one another a chance, they're making great progress already. And now the mystery vial! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying my story. You right...Harry and Severus are already beginning to see that they might of had some misconceptions about each other. With any luck...it will help smooth things a little along the way. ;>) Thanks for the lovely reviews.
~Missyann
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