| Title: Occlumency
| 07 Jun 2011 1:43 am
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| Reviewer: alba (Anonymous)
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Great story. Love how it is progressing. It great to see that though Harry lost his mother and adopted father he has now found his birth father. Looking forward to seeing where this goes
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I thought the original progressed too quickly, thus the re-write of the re-write. I'm a little over half-way through chapter 13, which has a scene I thought was sorely lacking in the first draft, but I have only just now figured out how to write it. I hope it turns out well.
Thanks for the review and I hope you continue to enjoy.
~Missyann