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Title: Be Careful What You Wish For 04 Jul 2011 6:44 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Petunia really dropped a bombshell on Harry, didn't she? It's nice to see him able to relax and have fun at Grimmauld Place with his friends, too. Harry deserves that. I like how you wrote that Harry was initially interested in Potions, until Severus treated him so poorly. That would fit in well with the movie version in PS/SS.

    Poor Harry. I'm sure it will work out for the best, but right now he's not going to be pleased at spending his summer with Severus.
Title: Come Again Headmaster-Part Two 04 Jul 2011 1:59 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another wonderful chapter, Missyanne! I love your wry humour and the detailed descriptions.

    Grimmauld Place truly lives up to its name as a grim old place, doesn't it?

    I like the background you have created for Severus and Dumbledore, that Severus took the Dark Mark at DD's urging.

    And of course Sirius was going to react badly, poor guy. He and Severus have a loooong way to go, if their relationship is going to improve any.

    Poor Harry and poor Sev...I have a feeling that it's going to be difficult for them before it gets better.
Title: His Best Mates 28 Jun 2011 12:15 am
Reviewer: CheyRainAwesomeness (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really god and I like it. How did you break your arm? I hope you update soon!
    Peace!
    CheyRain
Title: His Best Mates 27 Jun 2011 4:47 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Hope your hand continues to improve. Take it easy if you have to. We'll wait!
Title: Come Again, Headmaster? 26 Jun 2011 4:41 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I love how you can get into Severus' mind so perfectly. His thoughts and emotions are completely in character, though I never quite pictured him as a Hufflepuff, loyalty notwithstanding, lol.

    I loved how you pointed out Dumbledore's Slytherin qualities, too. Actually, though he's certainly brave, Dumbledore does almost strike me as more Slytherin than Gryffindor. He's definitely manipulative and knows how to get his way. And he's more brilliant than any Ravenclaw, and loyal and hardworking too. He really embodies all the Houses, doesn't he?

    I'm glad you went into detail about Lucius' motives and Severus teaching Harry Occlumency during the summer is certainly going to be interesting.
Title: His Best Mates 26 Jun 2011 4:39 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really hope Sev is okay and that he is with Harry when he starts to change more. I agree with Sev the changes are going to come fast, I have a feeling you are going to have him looking like Sev by Christmas. Is it bad I'm looking forward to that?

    So when is Harry (Is that really his name? Cause if it is, I want to know her rational for it. So far she seems like she was acting... well Gryffindorish.) going to find out that Sev is a half-blood? (Seriously, I want to know, just so I can smile if or when Harry tells Ron and Mione. Seriously, if one did not catch the very subtle hints in the books and movies, one would never know. *mutters about a matchbox*) Are we going to see Spinner's End? Will Sev have to stop spying? Will Sev protect Harry from Umbridge?

    More please! When you get a chance.

    PS~ I wish your hand speedy healing. Broken bones are horrible.
Title: A Strange Sort of Gift 26 Jun 2011 4:33 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a sweet letter from Lily. I loved how Harry noted that she had called him 'love' and how moved he was just by thinking that she had touched the paper. I definitely have a feeling that Harry is in for a shock! And Severus too!
Title: Thistles and Dandelions...Beware! 26 Jun 2011 4:26 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    A great beginning, Missyanne! It's very believable how Harry feels contaminated from his own guilt, though of course he's wrong. It's sad how he is trying to use the abuse from the Dursleys as a means of atonement, even though he has nothing to atone for, poor kid.

    A wonderful beginning!
Title: His Best Mates 26 Jun 2011 3:31 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    ouch, i bet that really bites!

    you mum is a saint to do that, i can't say my mother would do the same!

    wonderful chapter by the way!

    get well soon!
Title: His Best Mates 26 Jun 2011 12:58 am
Reviewer: Slegend (Signed) [Report This]
    Sorry to hear about your hand! and wow, what a trooper still writing with a broken hand! Yeah for your Mummy.

    Twas a fantastic chapter! Thought the talk with his friends went really well. It's great that Harry seems to want Sev to be his Father. I agree...it was awful that Lily did not give him the option to protect his family. I mean desperate times call for desperate measures and all that, but it still sucks....poor Severus!

    Love this story! Hope your hand feels better soon!

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