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Reviews For Along Came a Family
Poor Harry. I'm sure it will work out for the best, but right now he's not going to be pleased at spending his summer with Severus.
Grimmauld Place truly lives up to its name as a grim old place, doesn't it? I like the background you have created for Severus and Dumbledore, that Severus took the Dark Mark at DD's urging. And of course Sirius was going to react badly, poor guy. He and Severus have a loooong way to go, if their relationship is going to improve any. Poor Harry and poor Sev...I have a feeling that it's going to be difficult for them before it gets better.
Peace! CheyRain
I loved how you pointed out Dumbledore's Slytherin qualities, too. Actually, though he's certainly brave, Dumbledore does almost strike me as more Slytherin than Gryffindor. He's definitely manipulative and knows how to get his way. And he's more brilliant than any Ravenclaw, and loyal and hardworking too. He really embodies all the Houses, doesn't he? I'm glad you went into detail about Lucius' motives and Severus teaching Harry Occlumency during the summer is certainly going to be interesting.
So when is Harry (Is that really his name? Cause if it is, I want to know her rational for it. So far she seems like she was acting... well Gryffindorish.) going to find out that Sev is a half-blood? (Seriously, I want to know, just so I can smile if or when Harry tells Ron and Mione. Seriously, if one did not catch the very subtle hints in the books and movies, one would never know. *mutters about a matchbox*) Are we going to see Spinner's End? Will Sev have to stop spying? Will Sev protect Harry from Umbridge? More please! When you get a chance. PS~ I wish your hand speedy healing. Broken bones are horrible.
A wonderful beginning!
you mum is a saint to do that, i can't say my mother would do the same! wonderful chapter by the way! get well soon!
Twas a fantastic chapter! Thought the talk with his friends went really well. It's great that Harry seems to want Sev to be his Father. I agree...it was awful that Lily did not give him the option to protect his family. I mean desperate times call for desperate measures and all that, but it still sucks....poor Severus! Love this story! Hope your hand feels better soon! |
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