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Title: Chapter 9 - Reunion and Retirement 19 Oct 2011 7:47 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    That last bit just doesn't seem to fit, but I will wait to see how old Fudge plays out. I love all the father and son interactions.
Title: Chapter 9 - Reunion and Retirement 19 Oct 2011 6:41 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    about time! so glad fudge is gone!
Title: Chapter 8 - Retrieval 18 Aug 2011 11:42 pm
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! I laughed when Severus went down the slide and then when he realized there were stairs! Priceless! Great job!
Title: Chapter 8 - Retrieval 18 Aug 2011 10:45 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed) [Report This]
    Are you going to do a chapter or paragraph on how Fudge and the rest are reacting (besides panic) to the death of the Boy-Who-Lived? I know that Severus was trying to grab hold of something to slow down but towards the end why didn't he just turn him self over so he wasn't on his belly?

    Author's Response: Have you been reading my notes or is it that predictable? Keep your eyes open for the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 7 – Revelations 28 Jul 2011 1:24 am
Reviewer: Whitsnitch91 (Signed) [Report This]
    haha, sounds like a great chapter coming up next! Can't wait...
    Interesting chapter in itself.. I can't wat for the training to begin, it sounds like it will be a very interesting story!
Title: Chapter 7 – Revelations 24 Jul 2011 5:11 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    oooh wicked!
Title: Chapter 7 – Revelations 24 Jul 2011 3:34 am
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I don't think Harry should've done that, Severus is not going to be happy with him.
Title: Chapter 7 – Revelations 23 Jul 2011 7:05 am
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha nice ending! "He knew of the slide and the rapid decent, his father did not." lol pretty much my favorite line out of this chapter! Great job!
Title: Chapter 6 - Merlin and More 13 Jul 2011 6:05 pm
Reviewer: Whitsnitch91 (Signed) [Report This]
    LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT :) I'm so curious :) please continue :)
Title: Chapter 6 - Merlin and More 12 Jul 2011 4:59 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    So what's the crest? Now you got me curious, I'm looking forward to reading more!

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