wow! wonderful this chapter. Poor Severus I hope things get better soon!
Hi there!
Their bantering/ arguments are brilliant and very in character. And oh, poor Sev feeling like he has no place to belong again. *sniff*
But anyway, I like the slow uneasy progress. It will make it all the more sweet when/ if Harry and Snape finally learn to tollerate each other or maybe even love each other.
Yours happily, Melfis.
Very curious, Severus is clearly starting to get conflicting feelings...
This is good and confusing. I hope you update soon!
Peace!
CheyRain
Wow!!!! you will always be my favourite author!!!! Ilove this story! Please don't give up writing it but niether stop writing "The son becomes the father", please.
You have all my support,
| Title: Out of Place
| 28 Jun 2011 7:39 am
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| Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous)
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I really like this story. I hope that Severus and Harry can come to love each other. I like how you characterize Lily and the way you show Severus' thought process. Keep up the good work; I'll be looking for an update.
Okay, so what is going on? (By the way, I love that Harry has his dad's eyes. It's awesome!) Is this real or is it like the djinn thing, the pleasant version that is? Because I really kind of want it to be real! Please write more!
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