| Title: The Meaning of Words
| 12 Aug 2012 5:02 am
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| Reviewer: PamPam (Signed)
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eheheheh Harry that Severus so brazenly called "Dad" is great!. Chapter nice compliments
wow! wonderful this chapter. Poor Severus I hope things get better soon!
| Title: A Family They Never Had
| 12 Aug 2012 3:47 am
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| Reviewer: PamPam (Signed)
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hello, I registered just so sorry if your comment only now history. I must say I really like the first chapter. the only thing I regret is that Harry has his mother's eyes well, but better to have inherited from Severus eyes instead of your nose ^ _ ^ ... compliments
I'm so glad you updated! More please!
Love, love, love. I love how both Harry and Snape are realizing things and really putting forth an effort now. Fabulous. Great chapter. Thanks so much for the update!!
YES!! Loved this chapter! Finally they both stopped being so stubborn. The cake scene nearly brought tears to me eyes, wonderful job in narrating this whole chapter. Please update again soon!
YAY!!! All my prayers have been answered!!!! First that dramatic week and that Harry's "breakdown" and Sev finally seeing straight... Gaaah, I could hug you until you gasp for air!!
I know you updated only now but, pleeeeeaaaaaase (!!!), update soon!!
Your Melfis.
Wheew, I'm more than happy that James and Sirius aren't jerks, in fact I like them really well in your story! And oh my God, Harry pulling Sev into that shop was soooo adorable!!!
I wonder, if Snape will ever see what Harry is so desperate to gain... even if it has to be togetehr with our beloved Potions master?
Please, keep up the formidable work!!
Your Melfis.
Harry, Harry, quite contrary... but I can understand him. ^, ^ But anyway, Lily defending Severus was most cute and I die to read more!!!
*nearly drooling over my keyboard in wait for even more Snape-Harry interaction*
Your Melfis.
Hi there!
Their bantering/ arguments are brilliant and very in character. And oh, poor Sev feeling like he has no place to belong again. *sniff*
But anyway, I like the slow uneasy progress. It will make it all the more sweet when/ if Harry and Snape finally learn to tollerate each other or maybe even love each other.
Yours happily, Melfis.
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