Wow, what a brilliant beginning!! I can't wait to read more. *rub my hands in delightful anticipation*
Wow, the theory about their memories is brilliant and somehow I hope that they'll stay in that reality.
Your Melfis.
I loved the slow transition to this point. Very cool. Still got stuff to work on but they're getting better, right?
I cried a little along with harry during this chapter.
I liked that Snape is starting to come around finally
Aw, that's so cute.
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Glad you've updated.
I like that Harry and Snape are finally starting to act like father and son. Let's hope it continues, and both Harry and Snape will finally get what they've desired...a family.
Oh my god. Please tell me you're going to put this on the top of your update list. Please please please. I need more, especially when i'm depressed as hell, what with my sem finals comin up.
Severus had me going 'aw' the whole way through. I could literally feel the pain and longing radiating off him. (And the longing for more radiating off me) And the quill scene... If you're aiming to kill me with all those sweet-gruff-I'm-not-showing-my-emotions Sev moments, yes, you succeeded.
I love the last sentence. It makes me yearn for more, especially now they're both left alone. And it makes me so so so sad to see Sev yearning for so much and yet, couldn't do a thing about that insecurity of his.
Awesome awesome writing. Please, update soon? I'll give you a tropical quill? :)
Author's Response: Haha, actually, it's is. I don't why why, but inspiration and ideas are just flowing for this fic. I have to work on my prompt fic, but than I'll be right back to writing more and sending chapters off to my beta once she's had a break from her own RL stress :P
I'm really thrilled you liked those scenes and the fic. I can't give anything away yet, but I can say you'll like some of the developement occuring as soon as the next chapter. Thank you SO much for your review! :D I will update again as soon as I can.
i like this story! can't wait for the update
They're both confused aren't they? I hope this week provides a good deal of bonding time for the two of them!
Hmm..things seem to be progressing, rather slowly but that's to be expected. The last line was awesome though, I can't wait to read more!
I'm a bit emotional today but this chapter was so sweet it had me in tears. This story is awesome and I can't wait to read the update.
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