| Title: Chapter 12 A Window to the Past
| 29 Sep 2015 5:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Akusen (Anonymous)
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This is a great story. I've just read the 13 chapters.
I wish you wouldn't stop it...
Characters were really good, not OOC, which is rare...
I can't wait to see where this goes from here. I really look forward to and see how this all plays out. I love this.
| Title: Chapter 12 A Window to the Past
| 14 Jul 2012 5:48 pm
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| Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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Although I love this story, I found the multitude of typos to be very distracting. Does your beta not edit for misspellings and wrong word usage? If not, I'd be happy to act as your editor. That way your beta can just concentrate on the story.
| Title: Chapter 12 A Window to the Past
| 10 Jul 2012 1:25 am
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| Reviewer: winnhea (Signed)
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I love this story! I hardly ever review but I love this story too much to not leave one. I haven't read one this good in a long time. Thank you for sharing it!
| Title: Chapter 10 Half Told Truths
| 24 Jun 2012 7:14 am
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| Reviewer: TATIS (Signed)
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I love it
Please do not kill Sirius
| Title: Chapter 9 An Extra Guard
| 05 Sep 2011 3:58 am
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| Reviewer: Lumcer (Signed)
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Oww a secret reviled a new secret and all around curiosity! Please write more soon... Is this to be a canon story?
KCK-Lumcer
P.S. You have quite a few typos and miss placed words.
| Title: Chapter 9 An Extra Guard
| 18 Aug 2011 11:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great blending nd I loved Severus' part in it thanks
| Title: Chapter 8 Fateful Meetings
| 18 Aug 2011 11:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Liked your idea about Pius thank you
| Title: Chapter 6 Desired Questions and Unwanted Answers
| 18 Aug 2011 11:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great order meeting with all IC. I gree the book is better thn the film for the after the attack
| Title: Chapter 3 Through the Looking Mirror
| 18 Aug 2011 10:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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