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Reviews For Much Ado About Merlin
Peace! CheyRain Author's Response: lol thanks alot i have another story but had to post it on ff.net seeing as it's more about a girl maruader who travles through time revealing here meoires when she is sent to harry's time! and her freinds are siruis. remus, and severus! its' under my penname collinfan !
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The beginning of this story seemed difficult to get into at first. I don't know, maybe the sentence structure was a little too long? It was hard to read. But it was a cute story. Thank you for dreaming and writing about it. :) Author's Response: thank you! i know my wrting might be a litte um diffrent but that's what makes writers there own person! thanks again!
Author's Response: thank you i love reviews almost as much as giving them! i might wrtite another story depending on time!
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If I were Severus, I'd tell Harry to look up British legends and read Mallory's Morte d'Arthur and several other classic works. I'm sure Hogwarts library should have such books, seeing as he's their premiere wizard. But if not, then maybe Sev could take Harry into Muggle Edinburgh and go to a public library, they're bound to have info there about who he was. I personally like Mary Stewart's novels The Crystal Cave, The Hollow Hills, and The Last Enchantment, for a series that blends historical fiction with magic. Sorry Arthurian legends is one of my all time loves, I've read almost everything on the subject. A few small typos I noticed: he felt the man’s state aimed --should be stare when did you had --should be have Other than that, keep writing! Author's Response: thanks you are one of my fav. writers on here! i plan on doing another oneshot with this or a prequeal of sorts when i find the time lol! i love merlin to and arthur of course! there is a program on syfy called merlin by bbc season one and two are out and three just got done while four wil be showed in late 2012! most of my ff.net stoires are merlin thought all of the mup untill 30ish are bad becuse i did not have a beta at the time!
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