"Grammy! Did my Daddy ever get a spanking with your spoon cause he was naughty?"
Lol greatest line in this story. I have had my nieces ask my parents this but instead it was my dad's hand. Only more embarassing when it is a room of strangers lol.
Great job as usual. You can do an epilogue thing or a one shot of little scenes from the years after they are little to when they are in hogwarts or a chapter for everyone in a 7 shot. What I really want is Lily's pov on growing up with 6 brothers and dating lol.
This chapter was awesome! The teenager excerpt was interesting and definately showed the family theme perfectly. It would be cool to see all the kids as small children more but Hogwarts sounds like it would be more interesting. Maybe some shorts about them as littles and a full story for the Hogwarts years?
You need to upload the next chapter
Whatever works for you, it's just a great story!!!
Lollllllllll, truth always comes out of children's mouth ; ). Usually in a wront time unfortunately. Hmmm, they might get in a lot of mischief at Hogwarts... so continuing story there sounds good ; ). This chapter got me smiling a lot which I really need right now. Thanks for that!
Please update soon!
I'd really like to see more family time. Are you planning on doing little one-shots after this ends? Like little scenes from their life? That'd be pretty amazing but of course that's up to you. I for one really enjoyed this chapter. Please update soon!
| Title: A Story of Family
| 17 Mar 2012 4:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Toria (Signed)
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The spacing looks fine to me - don't worry!
And brilliant chapter! Sev was so cute at the end. He so needed to hear that story. And I love how it was Sev and Sirius playing together in Sev's room. As much as they won't admit it, they know how the other is feeling about the new baby, and about them not being Harry and Ginny's children.
And Harry should just wait until all the children gang upm on him asking for stories - then he'll really know about it!
Thank's for the update.
Brilliant, as always:)
I think you depicted the jealousy between the siblings just fine. I guess it that would be the expected reaction, especially as the Potter family is pretty large and Lily is the first girl out of all those boys.
I reckon it would be cool to see the kids at Hogwarts. I'd like to see them more grown up:)
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