| Title: Promise That You've Broken
| 09 Sep 2012 1:28 am
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| Reviewer: PamPam (Signed)
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mmm I was hoping it was just a dream of delirium but maybe I was wrong .. I read the next to better understand what really happened. compliments. beautiful chapter. Pam
This chapter of suspense and very nice. I'm running so I have little time to write ... I continue to read later. I conclude this review by saying compliments. Pam
POOR HARRY. reading I understand why the different meals but I do not know much more about the behavior of Severus keep reading to answer my questions. compliments. Pam
i like Luna she is fantastic! I think the food is different because Snape knows that Harry's stomach did not would keep the other more "complex". Chapter fantastic compliments. Pam
| Title: In The Most Unlikely Of Places
| 08 Sep 2012 8:24 pm
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| Reviewer: PamPam (Signed)
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I'm sorry to have found this your story now that it's over, but the comment anyway. This first chapter is very nice. I really like Luna, I would have also liked how the girl from Harry, but I'm happy also that it is his sister. the life of a street kid you described very well that I almost touched. the next chapter .. between some xd. Pam
p.s sorry if my English is not good
It's nearly 2o'clock in the morning and I should have been in bed hours ago, but I just couldn't leave without knowing Harry's happy ending.
Thank you so much for this wonderful story.
You had me worried with the chapter warning. Phew...I survived and so did the tissues ;)
So many authors take Luna too far, turning her almost into a caricature of herself. Your Luna is wonderful.
Three promises...things are looking up - and my tissue supply seems safe.
Your emotionally distraught Harry is just so beautifully done.
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