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Title: After The Battle Of Hogwarts 31 Oct 2012 2:28 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Any plans to continue?
Title: After The Battle Of Hogwarts 30 Jul 2011 6:41 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start Ashley.

    I can't wait to see what Snape wants.
Title: After The Battle Of Hogwarts 30 Jul 2011 6:39 pm
Reviewer: Snape Fan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    When there is dialogue, you need to separate it. You have several characters speaking in one very long paragraph. That is unnecessary and it makes your story difficult to read.

    Otherwise, not bad.

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