Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 14 Dec 2011 4:54 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    What an interesting start. But Harry better make sure Sev doesn't have access to his wand, otherwise he could end up getting hexed if Sev is in a temper! Will Sev regain use of his voice eventually?

    Will the Ministry try and arrest him for the supposed murder of Dumbledore? Then Harry will have to show them the memories or something. I can foresee much happening between them, as they finally have time to talk and clear up old misconceptions.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for your kind review, I am working on the next chapter but am very busy with work, school and the holidays are driving me nuts. I will continue this I promise. Also Snape will regain his voice in time and through their relationship will be strained at first Harry and Snape will come to an understanding. 

    Thanks again for the review and hope you will. Continue to read and I hope my writing will bet better over time. :) 

Title: Chapter 1 27 Nov 2011 7:45 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    Are you going to continue this? I love the start of it

    Author's Response: I plan on continuing, I have been very busy but will try to add to it.
Title: Chapter 1 07 Aug 2011 7:15 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    A little rushed through but promising
Title: Chapter 1 01 Aug 2011 6:51 pm
Reviewer: UltramarineQuest (Signed) [Report This]
    lol abt the last comment of the mediwizard....gr8 fic though!
Title: Chapter 1 30 Jul 2011 3:24 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    An interesting beginning. Thanks for not reiterating the final battle scene. I like how you just dropped us right there at the moment of Harry's discovery that Severus is still hanging on.

    I look forward to the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 1 30 Jul 2011 12:51 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting. I would love to see how Severus reacts to Harry wanting to take care of him. How will this relationship change Harry's other relationships? How will those two get along? Waiting anxiously for more!
Title: Chapter 1 29 Jul 2011 3:40 am
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Hee, hee - probably not!

    This is a pretty cliche plot idea so far, but heh, what better thing to read so soon after watching the poor man's demise in the latest film. Thanks for the ray of hope!

    A few mistakes with sentence structure, capitilisation, etc, so a read over to catch them would be beneficial.

    I'm looking forward to seeing how Severus will take the proposal of Harry looking after him.
    misundersnape...
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jul 2011 9:50 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is very promising but the chapter is sorely in need of a beta. If you wish I could beta it for you.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Really? thats great. My grammer and spelling stink. 
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jul 2011 9:34 pm
Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am glad that Severus was found alive. I always wondered about that they saved Mr Weasley from the snake and would think of all people whom would carry the antidote it would be snape?

    Author's Response:

    Glad you liked it. I always wondered that as well. I would have thought Severus would have been prepared for a situation such as the one he was in.

    Sev is not gonna be to happy about the idea of living with Harry.  

Title: Chapter 1 28 Jul 2011 7:26 pm
Reviewer: Delphin (Signed) [Report This]
    No, he likely won't want the same thing, mediwizard. But that won't stop out amazing writer from making it happen. :)

    Awesome, so far, please continue.

    Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked my first attempt at writing Potter, well actually my first attempt at a chaptered fic. LOL  I certainly will continue this, am thinking of having a banner made for the fic too.

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