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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Whispering Man
Author's Response: Oh how lovely, thank you! Glad you've found my story, it's always great when someone new starts reading it! Thank you so much for taking the time to review, so happy you're enjoying it - I'm looking forward to more reviews!!
Author's Response: I never know if 'interesting' is good, haha, but thank you so much for the review! ;)
Author's Response: Why thank you! You're too kind!
Author's Response: Great to hear! Thanks for the review!! :)
Once again, I enjoyed reading this chapter, only thing is that I would add a little more dialogue. And great introduction to Snape...I wonder what's wrong with Harry... Great job! Author's Response: Was it too emotional? I wasn't sure when I was writing it, but then I kept remembering it was Snape, and Harry, and Harry seemed to want to do that... Teenage boys, eh? What can you do? ;) Thank you, again!!
And don't worry about being new. I'm just like you really, I've been reading lots and lots of story and I've recently just written one so we're all on the same page here! I'm looking forward to reading more! Author's Response: Oh, oh, good - glad you like it! I can't believe I've only just started writing - I love it so much!! Thanks for the review!!
Author's Response: Haha, I really do love Snape, I have to say - really enjoy writing him now!! All will be revealed eventually my friend! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Otherwise - truely excellent chapter. Though I do have to wonder why Snape 'waited' for Harry to awaken, and didn't force the issue/help, or take Harry to help. Usually people don't faint for benign reasons - especially healthy, young, teenaged boys. I wonder what Severus thought of Harry's statement about the Dursleys leaving him lying unconscious - I hope we'll see next chap or so... Great job - I am enjoying very much! misundersnape... Author's Response: Hmmm, there may be more to come with the Dursleys... lets just leave it at that...! But did Harry 'faint' or is there something strange going on? I guess Snape had his reasons for waiting... Really glad you still like it! Thanks so much for reviewing! |
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