Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Strangers In The Park 24 Mar 2022 2:16 am
Reviewer: Wejee (Signed) [Report This]
    Any chance you’ll update this story? your writing and description is phenomenal !!!…..I truly feel it has a lot of potential , will you consider writing again?
Title: An Unexpected Visitor 30 May 2013 2:53 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed your first chapter. All the little details like the black, rotten fish-flavored bean or the little note from Sirius added a lot. It had to be a nasty shock for Harry that Snape was coming for him and I'm looking forward to reading more.

    Author's Response: Oh how lovely, thank you! Glad you've found my story, it's always great when someone new starts reading it! Thank you so much for taking the time to review, so happy you're enjoying it - I'm looking forward to more reviews!!
Title: Strangers In The Park 12 Apr 2012 4:36 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    hmmm. very interesting....

    Author's Response: I never know if 'interesting' is good, haha,  but thank you so much for the review! ;) 
Title: An Unexpected Visitor 12 Apr 2012 4:28 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    this is a very good start!

    Author's Response: Why thank you! You're too kind!
Title: Strangers In The Park 11 Apr 2012 9:17 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Why is Harry acting so odd I wonder
Title: An Unexpected Visitor 11 Apr 2012 9:08 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I like it

    Author's Response: Great to hear! Thanks for the review!! :)
Title: Strangers In The Park 03 Nov 2011 12:19 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, Harry certainly had an "emotional" reaction to the news that Snape was coming!
    Once again, I enjoyed reading this chapter, only thing is that I would add a little more dialogue.
    And great introduction to Snape...I wonder what's wrong with Harry... Great job!

    Author's Response: Was it too emotional? I wasn't sure when I was writing it, but then I kept remembering it was Snape, and Harry, and Harry seemed to want to do that... Teenage boys, eh? What can you do? ;) Thank you, again!!
Title: An Unexpected Visitor 03 Nov 2011 12:10 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed reading this and truly, you're off to a great start. Plus, you ended the chapter in just the right place to have your readers come back for more.
    And don't worry about being new. I'm just like you really, I've been reading lots and lots of story and I've recently just written one so we're all on the same page here! I'm looking forward to reading more!

    Author's Response: Oh, oh, good - glad you like it! I can't believe I've only just started writing - I love it so much!! Thanks for the review!!
Title: Strangers In The Park 11 Aug 2011 9:42 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, boy! I love a mystery! What can possibly be happening with Harry? Not to mention, what's with the "humanized" Snape?! On to the next chapter, to see what (if anything!) will be revealed!

    Author's Response: Haha, I really do love Snape, I have to say - really enjoy writing him now!! All will be revealed eventually my friend! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Title: Strangers In The Park 11 Aug 2011 11:32 am
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) [Report This]
    My only whine - no Dursley/Snape confrontation - I have a feeling you would have done that REALLY well!

    Otherwise - truely excellent chapter. Though I do have to wonder why Snape 'waited' for Harry to awaken, and didn't force the issue/help, or take Harry to help. Usually people don't faint for benign reasons - especially healthy, young, teenaged boys.

    I wonder what Severus thought of Harry's statement about the Dursleys leaving him lying unconscious - I hope we'll see next chap or so...

    Great job - I am enjoying very much!
    misundersnape...

    Author's Response: Hmmm, there may be more to come with the Dursleys... lets just leave it at that...! But did Harry 'faint' or is there something strange going on? I guess Snape had his reasons for waiting... Really glad you still like it! Thanks so much for reviewing!

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