| Title: Bedtime Stories
| 09 Jan 2018 5:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the story and of course having insight into the family life of the Potters. Thank you so much
Even the children are different.....
Hmm, please tell me that Severus is alive, the way Harry's children talk about it, well, it seems so, but he hasn't appeared once since the start of the story.............
Snape must be getting some idea of Harry's rotten home life by now. He's too quick on the uptake to be fooled by Harry's lies. One comment - early in the story, you wrote "his curiosity was peaked." The word you want there is piqued.
I like that various family members are telling the stories. This one was a more serious one so it seems we will be getting a nice variety. Just a little aside, it should be "his curiosity was piqued."
| Title: Bedtime Stories
| 08 Mar 2014 10:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love the scenes of the family as well as the stories thank you
you got me rally hooked into your stories. cant wait for the next one. :)
wonder what stories are next in line. :)
| Title: Bedtime Stories
| 25 Nov 2012 2:07 am
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| Reviewer: Tuffery (Anonymous)
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This is a great story, I like it very much :) I can't wait for more chapters :)
When I first read the " idea sentence", I really wondered how you'd be able to work it into a chapter...and obviously you did it very well! I enjoyed this one as much as the first one! Great work, very creative!
Please update soon, want to see how this story plays out! Hoping this will be a long fic! :)
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