| Title: Expectations
| 21 Apr 2014 8:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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Won't you continue? The grammars was bad at first but it got better when you got a beta. I love this story!
| Title: Expectations
| 11 Oct 2013 1:17 am
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| Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Anonymous)
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great chapter cant wait for more. :)
beautiful I think you really illustrated both their emotions and needs very well
looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Yes Sev you enjoy it. Come on in, join the dark Harry Potter club... we have cookies (and hopefully you!)
*laughs*
Great chapter. I like the expectations those two put forth and I truly hope that Harry open up enough to allow him to stay with Sev.
Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry I didn't respond to your last review, I haven't been keeping track of things very well. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and I'm also hoping that Harry is able to open up.
Great job. How come I missed this wonderful story. I will have to be more observant!
I love how Snape took over and how realistic Harry's insecurities are.
Looking forward to the next chappie.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm going to try to get out another chapter soon. :)
Well, I'm glad that Harry isn't as angry. Maybe he needed to know that someone cared, even if it was by punishing him for his misdeeds. It's good to see him reaching out, just a little, to Ginny and not reacting with anger to Hermione.
Author's Response: I think that it'll make a big difference for Harry to see that people do care. Maybe he'll realize that things aren't as hopeless as they seem. :)
Well, I'm glad that Severus has noticed that Harry needs help, even if he's not keen to take on that role yet, lol!
Harry's self esteem problems are really hurting him now. It's so bad that he believes that Snape was right to mistreat him, poor kid.
But he's really handling it badly, alienating his frieds and even worse, turning to alcohol. I hope someone (Snape?) can help him soon.
Aw, poor Harry. He sounds like he's suffering from depression. I had never thought of how staying with the Weasleys over the summer could be hard for him, but it makes perfect sense. It gives him a close look at what he's missing.
Great beginning!
Author's Response: Thank you! I always felt like Harry would struggle with seeing the Weasley family together because of his own situation, and I appreciate you noticing that part of the chapter.
Another amazing chapter! I cannot wait until the next one... Each chapter leaves me on the edge of my seat! =)
Author's Response: Thank you! I feel the same way about Backwards. :)
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