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Interestingly dark revalations about Hermione's family
staff...and academic secretary to aid the heads houses with there work as heads. Definitely poor Minerva needs a deputy, I mean poor witch has the pressures of 3 positions and the paperwork that they generate (head of house, deputy headmistress & transfigu-ration professor) so she's a little less-hands on with her house. Perhaps Albus should allow the students to sit at other tables with friends/siblings when its not a feast ...introduction of more social clubs arts, drama, music, theatre (both muggle & wizarding), fencing, swimming (in warm weather), archery, keep-fit, martial arts, debate club, literature, football, culture, languages, dancing, photography? As all of these would allow those who aren't playing quidditch to be involved in a social activitiy that isn't necessarily sports related. As a health body meand stamina - which must be good for magical development. Compulsory muggle studies (updated) for all those wizarded raised and for those muggleborn or muggle-raised wizard studies this would perhaps aid those of each groups to be able to be able understand each other there might be fewer misunderstandings. Also if both muggleborn, muggle-raised properly understood the new world that they've entered then they might in turn be better integrated within wizarding society as a whole. As you can tell I absolutely love this story, because of all the things that it makes me think of what Hogwarts could have/or do to aid its students...without having to over-burden its poor heads of houses even further! So now that young Harry's condition has been highlightened, does Albus still be believe that he's the one destined to defeat Voldemort or not? I really wish that Severus would tell Draco's father just what his son is behaving like at school because he's not shaping up at all!
please update again soon!
Every time I read this story, I find myself wanting more! More interaction with the students, with the professors, more everything! You really have a great way of capturing everyone's distinct personalities, and it makes for a great storyline! I cant wait for the next chapter!
I really like how you make it possible for us to visualize the action of the week that the children and teachers are describing to us, and how each chapter brings us more deeply into the situations in which each child is immured. Thank you for that last scene with Severus and Harry. While the blue dreadlocks were a cute idea, a Harry with shoulder-length dark hair is rather appealing. I love how Severus can be gentle with Harry--and still be his canon snarky self with others. Well done!
Will Harry now keep the long black hair? It's part of being Snape's little bat. Hugs and Love, Vanime |
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