Ah, will Hermes have bad dreams? Millicent would be bigger surprise though
| Title: Week 13
| 31 Jan 2012 10:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter love the way this is going nd Harry gets more lovely every chapter thank you
The summary is what intrigued me. If you do decide to change it, I would say that you should add something and leave what's there. On another note, I enjoyed this next chapter! I love a little suspense. Also, I really love that you are dealing with trangender/transsexual issues. It is perhaps my favorite part of the story,in general.
I look forward to the next installment,
Adrienne
Author's Response: Well, I changed one word and left the rest. I'm happy with it. Meh. :)
Watch me flail and then spontaneously combust because you'll take forever to update this story. Must you torture your readers so? Is it really necessary? What if I give you a hug? Will that make it better? As always, a perfect chapter. Harry continues to draw tears from my eyes, even when I stubbornly refuse to give them up. I love your Vince, and Hermes. The gender problem with Hermes is interesting, one I haven't yet seen in fanfiction. McGonagall's insistence that Hermes is a girl is far too infuriating for me to properly deal with. I do hope someone can reach out to Draco. Flitwick is right; he's damaged, but not irredeemable.
Author's Response: Aww, flailing. *likes* I'm trying to write my fics on a rotating basis. So this one will be coming up again as soon as I get Unbuttoned and Burnt updated.
Cliffhanger, much! I loved that chapter and you've made me really anxious over Hermes' situation. And the Harry and Snape scenes are so cute! Please update soon. I'll be awaiting that email...
:)
Author's Response: Thanks! Love your username btw.
This was brilliant! I loved reading it....update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I dunno, but you stopping just there is gonna drive me up a wall. Kudos, btw, and more please.
Author's Response: Well, there's no chance of you forgetting about me this way. :)
A more interesting summary?? Dunno...maybe add a snippet of a scene - a line or two??
Can't imagine what else to say, other that I loved this chapter, and I would imagine that Herme's nightmares are really bad and possibly part of why she/he is having a hard time being a she instead of a he.
I am most anxious to know what this nightmare was about.
Harry and Daddy Sev/Papa pa/'fessor Snape are just adorable together. I did wonder about Hadwyn and the two Harry's - is one to have been Harry as he should have been (no scar) and the one that was before he came to Hogwarts (with scar)? Very illuminating...
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Hugs and Love,
Vanime
Author's Response: Re: Harry - the no-scar Harry was baby Harry. Maybe I should have added that word in there. Hmm.
No ideas for a summary, but thank you very much for updating! I love this story, and had a very stressful week so seeing this updated made my night. Thank you!
Author's Response: Yay! Glad I could give you an uplift to the end of your week. :)
I say let the person who thinks they can write your story better than you, write the summary and let the rest of us see who the real writer is! After all, they found it "interesting" enough to read so it really can't be that uninteresting, right? JMHO
Author's Response: Muahahhahaha. Personally, I think my summaries are way better than the folks who say, "I suck at summaries! Just read my stuff or else!" lol
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