| Title: Time and Chance
| 17 Jan 2014 4:48 am
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| Reviewer: Diannika (Anonymous)
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you do realize, you have dumbledore dead before harry goes to hogwarts in this universe dont you?
Oooohhhh! You REALLY had me going during the poker game-- and I don't even play poker! I guess the most terrifying aspect is the fact that Snape could have lost, and Harry would be stuck in the hereafter forever. Unless... Is there any chance that Snape used Legilimency on Peeves to ensure that Snape won? I mean, you'd think that after binding Peeves to play honestly, Snape would've done the same, BUT Harry's very life was not something he could truly leave to a game of chance, right? *hopes that Snape wouldn't gamble Harry's mortal life away* Anyway, terrific story all through!
LOL, loved the ending! Haha, I'm one of your reviewers on fanfiction as well but I don't mind doing ti twice!
Once again, I really enjoyed reading this chapter, I knew there would be a happy ending! For record, I hope you'll write a few more in this universe. Hufflepuff! Harry and Severus are too good of a combination, I'd love to more interaction between them again! Hope to hear from you soon :)As always, I love reading your stories.
Nice story! :)
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I also have a prequel to this story called Harry Potter and the Unspeakable if you'd like to read it. That one explains how Harry became Sev's ward in the first place
Great final chapter. Justice all round.
Author's Response: Yes, and that's the way I like it!
Another fabulous story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Good chapter. All the food descriptions made me feel hungry and I've already eaten my lunch. Harry is so lucky that Snape is who he is.
Author's Response: Thanks! You know, you're not the first person to say that about my food descriptions. Maybe I should write for a food magazine. If you think that made you hungry, check out my latest chapter of Stormcaller and you can see what the Malfoys and their guests are having for dinner. And Harry really is lucky to have Snape as his godfather, because nobody else could fix the mess he's in.
I just love all the details about Peeves reentering the mortal world, rediscovering his long-lost senses, eating a fine breakfast. Then come the details about Harry amusing himself in the library, including his unwittingly reckless behavior in the Restricted Section. Finally, I loved the scene with Snape scrying Peeves. You've really put together a fabulous chapter here, and I'll look forward to reading the next one-- can't wait to see the confrontation between Snape and Peeves!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I had the hardest time getting this chapter done, and I felt like I sort of threw it together, so I'm glad you like it! I've also updated Stormcaller if you're reading that one.
i think severus will be very very pissed off!
Author's Response: Yes, he sure will! To see how much, just read my new chapter!
i think severus will be very very pissed off!
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