Title: The Truth Unfolds
| 28 Aug 2018 6:46 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved it, very intense but their emotions were so well portrayed thank you
Title: The Truth Unfolds
| 12 Sep 2015 12:12 pm
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Reviewer: hule (Signed)
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Thank you for the story. Just what I needed after a horrible week with loads of issues. Harry and Snape obviously have some more. Wonderfully written! Sequel?
Title: The Truth Unfolds
| 17 Mar 2013 1:11 am
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Reviewer: Sabrina Isabelle (Anonymous)
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I really enjoyed this story. The actions and reactions were believable and well written. Thank you for writing and posting.
Great story! Just wondering what it was that the old coot put in the papers that infuriated Severus so terribly. Awfully unsporting of you to not tell us, hence my rating!
Great story! Just wondering what it was that the old coot put in the papers that infuriated Severus so terribly. Awfully unsporting of you to not tell usm hence my rating!
This seems like such a great start. I felt like there so much more you could add to make the story even better! Which sounds a bit odd seeing as it's already so long but truth be told, I did enjoy it but it seems a bit unfinished, like I said. I feel like it was bit rushed in places and Harry seemed to give in to Snape really easily. But suggestion aside, I quite enjoyed reading and am certainly looking forward to reading in in its full form! (so no pressure or anything :D )
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