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Reviews For Secrets and Lies
Author's Response: I intend there to be a consequence, but this story was meant to show how much a life can change in one night...not meant to go through the whole story. I'm wanting to address the results of what happened in a sequel that will be in a more traditional story form.
I will admit that this feels like the first few chapters of a longer story. I'd love to see a continuation of this, where you address some of the hanging threads--like the details of the contract, whether any of the Slytherin students will be attempting to take out Harry and Sev in the next school year, having that meeting between Harry and Ron and Hermione and (hopefully) clearing the air between them, and, of course, the reaction of Harry's Housemates when school starts again. May we ask for a sequel? :) Author's Response: I really want to write a sequel and address all of these issues. I think that it would take place a little bit down the line so that we can see the consequences of their actions that night in motion rather than writing the lead up to it. I want them right in the thick of it in the sequel. :). Thank you so much for your review and awesome comments. <3
Author's Response: I completely agree and I am so glad that you liked it. I am waiting for my beta to read over it and polish things up and once she's done I'm going to have a better idea of where to improve certain scenes and stuff. I do intend to go back and "fix" this story up a bit. It is in it's raw form at the moment. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it and all of your wonderful suggestions and comments. :D.
I reall enjoyed that. You've really captured Snape and harry's insecurities, worries and fears. I wouldn't mind reading more about Harry and snape's relationship, should you decide to write a sequel or more from this universe. Author's Response: :D. Thanks. <3
I reall enjoyed that. You've really captured Snape and harry's insecurities, worries and fears. I wouldn't mind reading more about Harry and snape's relationship, should you decide to write a sequel or more from this universe. Author's Response: Aww, thank you!! :D. I am currently obsessed with my NaNoWriMo story, but I will be going back to Harry Potter soon after November and I think I would like to delve into this particular story a little deeper. Either with a more indepth re-write of certain scenes or with a sequel. I'm not sure yet, but, again, thank you! :D. |
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