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Reviews For What Might Have Been: Salute
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Author's Response: Lol. Did it really. Was it the song or the story or perhaps both?
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I would have liked it to have been longer, to see the moment Snape realised something was wrong with Harry's home life. Also, I do not believe that Harry, as an 11 year old boy, would hold Snape's hand, no matter how scared he might be. He is too unused to touch, and would likely be too worried about classmates seeing him reaching out for comfort. Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
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