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Reviews For Hypothermia
Title: Chapter 1: Hypothermia 24 Jul 2017 10:17 am
Reviewer: suzn18 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really loved your story. Unfortunately it is really short (I could be spoiled with some of your other stories) and I would love to see a 2nd chapter. But anyway, Love it!
Title: Chapter 1: Hypothermia 07 Mar 2016 5:10 pm
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed) [Report This]
    aww...sweet.
Title: Chapter 1: Hypothermia 21 Jun 2015 8:22 am
Reviewer: TheReapersDaughter (Signed) [Report This]
    nice
Title: Chapter 1: Hypothermia 16 Apr 2014 3:33 pm
Reviewer: victoria (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this you are an exceptionally gifted writer please write more fanfics.
Title: Chapter 1: Hypothermia 26 Oct 2013 8:04 am
Reviewer: Syrine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awwwww It was so cute
    It would have been better to have Snape scolding Harry after he got better, and much much better if a spanking was involved
Title: Chapter 1: Hypothermia 31 May 2012 3:50 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Simple but nice
Title: Chapter 1: Hypothermia 28 Dec 2011 8:03 am
Reviewer: Kai (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a good story, like the plotline and all. Maybe continue it in the future?
Title: Chapter 1: Hypothermia 21 Nov 2011 2:59 pm
Reviewer: kazza (Signed) [Report This]
    A nice vignette. I like it a lot. One little suggestion - the rhythm of the story might flow a little better if the longer paragraphs in the second half were split into 2 or 3 paragraphs. I'm not suggesting that you change a single word, but just reflect that lovely minimalist style of the first half in the second half.
Title: Chapter 1: Hypothermia 17 Nov 2011 10:16 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely finished piece of writing thnk you

    Author's Response:

    glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing

Title: Chapter 1: Hypothermia 17 Nov 2011 6:43 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    I like it. Have you thought of doing a sequel to this? Like what happens in the aftermath or write a story on what happens next? Love it.

    Author's Response: I dont know, its a possibilty though

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