Ohh, this is gonna be all sad and I won't be teary from laughter, huh? maaaaan.
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Author's Response: Yeah, sorry. This one got dark. I don't really know why, but this story just took hold, and it sort of just had to be this way. But I loved writing it. Thanks so much for the review. I hope you like it anyway!
Definitely a good start!
Author's Response: Glad it appealed to you! Thanks for the review!
| Title: The First Shadow
| 22 Dec 2011 11:35 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved it! I'm sure I read the first two but might have to refresh my memory! No hardship there! One point Severus says anyways a lot in britain we say anyway and I'm sure he would be a sticular for correct language
Author's Response: Oh, I had no idea about the anyway thing! Thank you for the tip. Thanks a lot for the review, and I'll fix that soon.
I'm definitely very intrigued by this story. I can't help wondering just how and when Severus came to have both Harry and Draco as his wards/sons?
Author's Response: Oh, read the first two stories! This is the third in the series! You can find it all out in Days We Learn From.
Good to see more from you, especially if it's going to be long. I enjoyed the first chapter, and will be looking out for more even if I am a little worried by the warnings! Not that I mind a bit of darkness, but I do hope that the little family will be intact at the end.
Author's Response: Well, you will see that is for sure. It sounds a lot darker than it is though, I promise you that, as the darkness is scattered in with the light. Thanks you so much rosina for reviewing, it's good to hear from you!
Yes, enjoying it very much. And I like Laura and I am worried about Severus
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm really glad to hear some feedback about Laura, as I was wondering what people thought of her.
Yes, enjoying it very much. And I like Laura and I am worried about Severus
Yes, enjoying it very much. And I like Laura and I am worried about Severus
I'm very excited to see a new installment to this series! I don't mind a darker tone at all - so far, you still have enough humorous moments to keep it an easy and enjoyable read (and now I'm very curious why Dumbledore doesn't want a drama group at Hogwarts!).
Poor Severus, let's hope it's nothing serious! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Oh goodness, you can find the whole tale of why Dumbledore doesn't want a drama group in Tales of the Beedle Bard in Dumbledore's notes after the story The Fountaing of Fair Fortune! I am so glad you are liking it, and am happy to hear from you again Sita Z!
Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks!
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