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Reviews For This World of Glass
Author's Response: Yes, oregano! Totally. A friend of mine managed to sell a whole bag of oregano to someone claiming it was pot. Seriously. Thanks for the review.
through them. So far I enjoy the story - except the long paragrahs! Author's Response: Hi! Unfortunately, I have to tell you that there are a few more long paragraphs in this story, but they are that way for a reason. Some thoughts require a few more sentences to complete. I've tried my best to break them up, but not all of them are going to be that way, just because of the nature of some ideas. If it's the spacing that bothers you (I know the lines seem pretty close together sometimes, especially after reading a long time) you could copy and paste the chapters into Microsoft Word and change the spacing to double spaced, so it's easier on the eyes. Thanks for reviewing. Glad you are enjoying the story.
Author's Response: Yes indeed ... Thank you so much for the review rosina!
I really like where you're going with this, and while I can tell that difficult times are ahead for Sev and his boys, I love how you include all those fun little moments - the singing quill, the homesick firsties and last but not least Sev and Lily. Looking forward to more... oh, and PLEASE don't let anything happen to Munkastrap. Sad stories about cats just kill me... Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback! Glad you like the little bits of humor. Keeps it lighter, you know? I'll just tell you straight up, nothing will happen to Munk, that little rascal is more than fine. You'll find out in a couple chapters what mischief he's been getting into! Sad cat stories break my heart too, so he's going to be A-okay. Cheers! |
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