| Title: Where the Crystal Ball Breaks
| 28 Feb 2015 11:37 pm
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| Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed)
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oh those poor kids. my father informed me a few weeks ago his cancer is back and may have spread to his bones... soooo yeah. it's not easy to hear. -sigh-
--his
Author's Response: Oh no - I am so sorry. Gosh, best wishes for you and your father. I'm really sorry. My grandmother died of lung cancer, so I can understand to some degree what you're going through. Best of wishes, Whitetail.
Oh no! They never get a break huh :(
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Lady Destiny!
| Title: Where the Crystal Ball Breaks
| 22 Jan 2012 7:10 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Well, that had me looking for the tissues, although as Severus said it had to be done. It was hard to read - not for the writing, which was excellent - but simply because I've got so used to fanfiction Snape having all the answers which here he doesn't. Neither does there seem anyone else on the horizon to give him hope and you've made him such a nice character too!
Anyway, good work and I'll look forward to the fun bits coming up.
Author's Response: Thanks rosina for the feedback! I'm sorry it's so sad, but with this sort of story it has to be. But there will be a lot of fun stuff though, so keep looking ahead. Cheers!
No, you have to fix it. Fix it and make Severus well. He is young and those children need a father.
Author's Response: It is a ghastly predicament, isn't it?
| Title: Where the Crystal Ball Breaks
| 22 Jan 2012 12:56 am
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| Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
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That was so, so sad. I loved your characterizations in this, with Harry's eternal optimism holding out until the last possible moment. I also loved how you described Severus' thoughts and feelings, particularly the bit about normal things like the weather not changing when everything else has changed. That was very well done.
Bring on the fun bits, now :)! And bring on a cure - I'm like Harry, I guess, I won't give up hope.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank Sita! I'm glad you like Harry and Severus' reactions and such, as I've put a lot of thought into it all. I'm looking forward for the fun bits too, and they're coming down the pipe soon, so keep reading!
*sniff* that was sad.
Author's Response: Thank your for reviewing.
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