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Title: The Traitor's Lament 01 Mar 2015 2:12 am
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    For Heaven's Sake... what is your deal? Torture, torture, torture. Are you trying to see how much Harry can take before he breaks? ;)

    --his

    Author's Response: In my defense I wrote this one when I finishing high school, and I was a grumpy, emotional, basket case ... hehe. Evil indeed! Haha, thanks for the review.
Title: The Traitor's Lament 14 Mar 2012 2:05 am
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohhhh...Poor Severus - I feel so bad for him, Harry and Draco.

    I also get the feeling that the Order will be examining their reactions and actions to Severus in light of the news of his dying of this disease. I have a big feeling that they are going to do everything they can to get Draco and Severus back from the Dark Lord.

    Wonder how Ron W. will be feeling about he's treated Severus too?

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback Vanime!
Title: The Traitor's Lament 11 Mar 2012 11:12 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter again. You wrote the range of Sevreus' emotions so well - helplessness/hopelessness/anger.... I liked how you brought in some more of the other characters too.
    I'm just glad that Severus was stopped from going straight to Voldemort - that would surely have been an immediate disaster for both him and Draco.

    Author's Response: Thanks rosina for the feedback! I'm happy that you enjoyed it, and thought Severus' emotions were well done. I quite agree that it would have been bad if he just went rushing off. Cheers!
Title: The Traitor's Lament 10 Mar 2012 6:06 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    i sure hope draco's alive. even though this is depressing, it was still well written

    Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! :)
Title: The Traitor's Lament 10 Mar 2012 4:14 pm
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter, Whitetail! I loved Severus' argument with the Order, and the underlying resentment on both sides. They still don't quite trust him, and Severus senses this and reacts accordingly.

    The second part with Harry was depressing, yes, but very well-written! Their reactions were perfectly believable, even though it's sad to see how little hope Severus has left. He seems to have decided that turning himself in is the only option.

    Now, don't leave us hanging for too long :)!

    Author's Response: I am quite relieved to know that you thought the reactions were believable, as I spent a great deal of time on them and tried not to make them too overblown or too mild for the situation. Glad you liked it Sita, and don't worry, I won't leave you guys hanging too long. Thanks so much for taking the time to write a review!

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