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Title: All That Mattered 04 Oct 2014 5:25 pm
Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please write a sequel to this. What happens to Laura and sev? Please?

    Author's Response: It is tempting! What happens to Laura and Sev? Well, they got married - it's quite the story how Severus proposed ... actually. Tempting ... tempting to post something like that ... They ended up with some lovely grandchildren from Harry and Ginny, as well as a set from Draco and Hermione. Before the grandchildren arived they had one daughter together. That's the basic info I decided a looonnng time ago. Another story would be lovely to do, though, but I don't know if I ever will. Thanks so much for reading, Jessica! I am very glad you enjoyed it.
Title: All That Mattered 05 Aug 2014 12:36 pm
Reviewer: snarry fan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    U r best

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Title: The Verdict Reached 04 Aug 2014 5:30 pm
Reviewer: snarry fun (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hate u spoiler it is sad.....

    Author's Response: Yeah, sad indeed. True, true, I am evil.
Title: All That Mattered 11 Feb 2014 8:27 pm
Reviewer: Kyoko (Signed) [Report This]
    God this story made me cry so much! I hurt so badly for Severus and his boys, but also for Albus, knowing that he wouldn't survive ;_;

    But you also made me smile and laugh at so many parts and, even though I usually don't like first person narrators, I enjoyed this story sooooo much!

    and Severus' animagi form was just too sweet ^^

    Author's Response: Hi Kyoko! Thank you so much for reviewing! I absolutely love it when people review past stories of mine! This one will always be very dear to my heart, so it is especially wonderful for me to hear what you think about it! It is also great to know you enjoyed it despite the first person narration - which means I've done my job! Thanks again for reviewing!
Title: Molly's Say 11 Feb 2014 8:21 pm
Reviewer: Kyoko (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww nooo :( I don't like it when Severus gets pushed into changing anything about him. I love his hair xD

    Author's Response: Oh dear me. I suppose you'll have to talk to Molly about that ... thanks for reviewing!
Title: Stifling Worries 02 Mar 2013 1:00 pm
Reviewer: Elizzza (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please stay away from so very long paragraphs! It gets very tiring to get
    through them.

    So far I enjoy the story - except the long paragrahs!

    Author's Response: Hi! Unfortunately, I have to tell you that there are a few more long paragraphs in this story, but they are that way for a reason. Some thoughts require a few more sentences to complete. I've tried my best to break them up, but not all of them are going to be that way, just because of the nature of some ideas.  If it's the spacing that bothers you (I know the lines seem pretty close together sometimes, especially after reading a long time) you could copy and paste the chapters into Microsoft Word and change the spacing to double spaced, so it's easier on the eyes. Thanks for reviewing. Glad you are enjoying the story.
Title: All That Mattered 13 Feb 2013 3:21 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nicely tied up at the end, and I'm so glad that Severus accepted the Sherbet Lemon! Just a thought-- if you ever decided to do a one-shot based on this story, I would dearly love to see the scene between Severus and Sirius (with Harry grinning wildly) when Sirius discovers the true identity of the fox he rescued (and which sicked up on him... twice!). Loved the entire trilogy of stories, Whitetail! Way to go! :-D

    Author's Response: Oh gosh, that would be funny. I bet Sirius would light on fire on the spot when he found out just who he had so kindly carried back to the Burrow! I am so glad you enjoyed the trilogy! I had a blast writing it, and I am nothing but delighted at the knowledge that it has been enjoyed, especiallly considering I only ever meant to write the first story in this series! I am glad I continued, and that is very much in part because of the wonderful people who have reviewed and encouraged me. Even now it makes my day to see a comment left on something I have finished! It keeps me motivated to work on other projects. Thanks so much for your comments shadow!
Title: Something Crazy 12 Feb 2013 11:48 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Funny your end comment went as it did-- I was planning to say I kept grinning like an idiot as I read this chapter! Wonderful!

    Author's Response: Yeah, that is a little funny! I am glad you enjoyed it! I really, really had fun writing this part. Like, way too much fun. Thanks for sharing, and I am glad you too grinned like an idiot during this chapter!
Title: Molly's Say 12 Feb 2013 11:30 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just had to giggle at the concept of Severus thinking his dress robes were a bit loose! It's in the very nature of robes to be loose; how else could he expect to billow effectively?! (Of course, perhaps billowing at a ball isn't the done thing...) ;-D (Having such fun with this story!)

    Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I suppose. Although, I think he was probably thinking in the arms, shoulders, and across the chest. The rest of the robes would be looser.  Besides, dress robes probably wouldn't flair too much because they might get caught on others! I am glad you are enjoying it! It is fun to hear your reactions.
Title: Daybreak 12 Feb 2013 10:50 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fred & George-- it's gotta be! But I'm keeping my fingers crossed that the W.Wort will really prove a cure!

    Author's Response: Haha, yeah, anything Fred and George cook up has to be pretty potent. Thanks for reviewing!

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