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Title: The Verdict Reached 16 Mar 2012 1:31 am
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy, that was an emotional ringer you put us through! I am most anxious to know what happens next at the Malfoy Manor - and wonder what will happen with the Order members when they see Severus show up...

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    Author's Response: Hey Vanime! Thanks for dropping a line. It's good to hear some feedback, as always.
Title: The Verdict Reached 16 Mar 2012 12:47 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad I was alone in the house to read that - you certainly know how to write emotional chapters! Of course it was inevitable that Snape would have to go - I just hope it turns out to be worthwhile in the end. Glad there's still a few chapters to go yet.

    Author's Response: Thank you rosina! It was quite sad, wasn't it? I'm quite happy there are a few more chapters too! ;)
Title: The Verdict Reached 15 Mar 2012 4:58 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    *sniffle* good chapter *sniffle*

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it. *Passes the tissue box*
Title: The Verdict Reached 15 Mar 2012 1:30 pm
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    Sev, nooo! Well, I knew he was going to, but still... that final scene with Harry was heart-wrenching, but I'm glad Severus decided he had to tell Harry what he was doing. I don't think Harry could have dealt with it if his father had simply disappeared.

    I really liked how Molly watched him go, and didn't stop him. She of all the Order members would understand what he was doing.

    Kudos to you for writing such a riveting, emotional story; I'm looking forward to every single chapter! And no, *still* not giving up on my theory ;)...

    Author's Response: Thanks Sita! I'm glad you're looking forward to the chapters so much, and that you liked Molly's reaction. I thought that it fit well, considering what sort of character she is, you know? Oh yes, and it is nice to see you're still hanging onto your theory. You certainly will have to tell me if you are right! 
Title: The Verdict Reached 15 Mar 2012 12:49 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Egads, i hope this ends well for Draco, Harry and Severus.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing graynavarre!
Title: The Traitor's Lament 14 Mar 2012 2:05 am
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohhhh...Poor Severus - I feel so bad for him, Harry and Draco.

    I also get the feeling that the Order will be examining their reactions and actions to Severus in light of the news of his dying of this disease. I have a big feeling that they are going to do everything they can to get Draco and Severus back from the Dark Lord.

    Wonder how Ron W. will be feeling about he's treated Severus too?

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback Vanime!
Title: The Traitor's Lament 11 Mar 2012 11:12 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter again. You wrote the range of Sevreus' emotions so well - helplessness/hopelessness/anger.... I liked how you brought in some more of the other characters too.
    I'm just glad that Severus was stopped from going straight to Voldemort - that would surely have been an immediate disaster for both him and Draco.

    Author's Response: Thanks rosina for the feedback! I'm happy that you enjoyed it, and thought Severus' emotions were well done. I quite agree that it would have been bad if he just went rushing off. Cheers!
Title: The Traitor's Lament 10 Mar 2012 6:06 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    i sure hope draco's alive. even though this is depressing, it was still well written

    Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! :)
Title: The Traitor's Lament 10 Mar 2012 4:14 pm
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter, Whitetail! I loved Severus' argument with the Order, and the underlying resentment on both sides. They still don't quite trust him, and Severus senses this and reacts accordingly.

    The second part with Harry was depressing, yes, but very well-written! Their reactions were perfectly believable, even though it's sad to see how little hope Severus has left. He seems to have decided that turning himself in is the only option.

    Now, don't leave us hanging for too long :)!

    Author's Response: I am quite relieved to know that you thought the reactions were believable, as I spent a great deal of time on them and tried not to make them too overblown or too mild for the situation. Glad you liked it Sita, and don't worry, I won't leave you guys hanging too long. Thanks so much for taking the time to write a review!
Title: He Is Waiting 04 Mar 2012 4:31 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    *aims wand threateningly* you had better update soon, author! or else!

    lol.yeah, this chapter made me want to cry. ya happy now? hmmm?

    i'll be waiting for the update. :D

    Author's Response: *Ducks and crosses fingers* Well, that update will be coming fairly soon. I generally don't wait longer than five days, so keep that wand in your cloak! ;) Thanks for the review!

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