I enjoyed reading fom Snape's POV. I almost want Harry to stay Jayden, just to have a normal school year. Although I bet Severus will start having his suspicions before long...
Did Dumble transfer the soul? Who else is so powerful...
Title: Snape's Point of View
| 19 Apr 2012 12:28 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Sorry I missed this when it was posted very good chpter with interesting ideas. I find Severus' speech rather hard to follow, You are trying to keep his formal way of speaking but I think the sentences become rather convoluted sometimes.
Ohh... maybe Harry will lose interest in getting 'himself' back... I can certainly see the temptation, Jaden has a nice life compared with Harry. Snape's pov was interesting - and I loved seeing how observant the man is. Even the tiniest clue was not lost on him. He mightn't understand them all yet, but he noticed each one. Looking forward to more... misundersnape...
Author's Response: Yes, he is certainly very tempted to remain as Jaden at this point. I'm glad you found Sev's POV interesting, and you're entirely correct about his observance. Thanks for the review.
interesting story.
True Jaden, there is more to Severus than what appears on the surface
Title: Snape's Point of View
| 03 Mar 2012 6:09 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great way of showing Severus' point of view and Harry' gradual acceptance of Slytherin thank you
I'm in love with this story. Is Sev ever going to realize that Jaden was Harry at one point?
Looking forward to more!
So, here's my theory. Dumbledore couldn't have been the one who switched Harry's soul into another's body, neither would Voldemort have any reason to do that. I think Jaden, not Harry, from the future time traveled back in time to do that. The letter ended in J, no? Time traveling was definitely involved. Hahaha....I love conspiracy theories. Finally, Snape and Jaden are getting some interaction. Too bad Jaden is already adopted, though. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Ohh this is getting so good
Excellent chapter! I loved it! I am glad that Sev is looking out for his Snakes! They need someone to care for them:). Amazing job!:)
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