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Reviews For A Different Pair of Eyes
BTW, After Kevin woke up he call Jaden Harry ;) Author's Response: Yes, that will be quite an interesting point to read, as I know. Thanks for your review, but also for pointing out that Kevin called him "Harry". That was an error both myself and my beta missed, lol. I fixed it, thanks.
I'm disappointed Harry didn't channel his old Gryffindor trait of courage and talk to Hermione... I'm sure she would have reacted positively. More please... misundersnape... Author's Response: Haha, yes well despite the fact that it never occured to me for Sev to reveal that (at least, so soon), I do not think Sev would so willingly offer personal details to just anyone. Revealing he had a Gryffindor friend as a child would perhaps also be a poor example, since it hadn't ended very well and yet he couldn't be able to say that Lily was a bad friend. It would then mean admitting to his own mistakes, all of which I do not think he would want to tell anyone, much less a child. Harry's courage took a beating this time, though he may get another chance in the future. He doesn't know how she'd react, so it scares him that she may reject him. Thank you very much for your reviews and comments, it made my day! :D
Snape's pov was interesting - and I loved seeing how observant the man is. Even the tiniest clue was not lost on him. He mightn't understand them all yet, but he noticed each one. Looking forward to more... misundersnape... Author's Response: Yes, he is certainly very tempted to remain as Jaden at this point. I'm glad you found Sev's POV interesting, and you're entirely correct about his observance. Thanks for the review.
Interesting too, that Harry was actually able to perform well without Snape glaring in anger and spite and breathing down his neck - just as Harry performed better with Slughorn. I'm rather surprised Snape let Harry get away with the 'secrets' comment - even if he is disguised as one of Snape's little snakes at the moment. I didn't imagine Snape would take that kind of cheek from anyone, heh, but who would really know... Very interesting and entertaining chapter - good job! misundersnape... Author's Response: Thank you for your review! :D I would imagine that Sev let Harry get away with having secrets because he didn't want to push the boy, since he understands how easily any trust gained can be taken away by "putting a child in their place". Thanks again!
misundersnape
True Jaden, there is more to Severus than what appears on the surface
Looking forward to more!
Finally, Snape and Jaden are getting some interaction. Too bad Jaden is already adopted, though. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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