Title: Paranoia
| 12 Apr 2018 8:26 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great start to the story
Good start. I like these kind of story`s. :P
Fascinating opening chapter. I am intrigued.
WOW! What a great beginning, you captured my attention immediately! To bad the chapter ended so abruptly, but perhaps that'll givve me more of a reason to await the update?
Nice, hope you'll update soon!
I wonder who that man in the library was, and what he was doing there? And how did he know?
Ah, so many things, nice one!
Very good start! Creepy and well-written. I like it, keep going :D
Great story! =) I'm looking forward to reading more
Great story! =) I'm looking forward to reading more
Great story! =) I'm looking forward to reading more
Oh-oh! Harry sounds like he's really facing something horrible this time! Can't wait to see what happens next! Especially like the fact that Ripper has his tail constantly between his legs whenever Harry is around. 'Bout time!
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