Good start. I like these kind of story`s. :P
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| 10 Apr 2015 8:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Fantastic! Looking forward to more!
| Title: Struggle
| 09 Apr 2015 11:04 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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I love this. I hope to see more when you can :)
I love this! Keep it coming!
I love that last line from Ron. :-) I like that Ron is sticking with Harry through this.
Lots of mystery still to unravel. I think it's good that Harry has Ethan to help him, and hopefully Ron will continue to be a help.
Poor, lost Harry, being hunted already. Hopefully he'll make it to the Weasley's in time, and Ron will be helpful. I like how baffled Harry is in all of this, and how the reader does learn, right along with Harry.
Fascinating opening chapter. I am intrigued.
Awesome. I love Ron. Great job keeping the boys in character. Really imaginative plot.
| Title: Struggle
| 12 Mar 2015 6:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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I love this so much, JA. I love your spin on the mythology so it has a Teen Wolf feel without being an exact replica of the show. Can't wait for the next update!
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