Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 09 Mar 2024 10:33 am
Reviewer: Nemo (Signed) [Report This]

    I think this story has potential! Please continue writing :)

Title: Chapter 1 21 Nov 2013 6:06 am
Reviewer: Zang (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi,
    I think deaged Severus is a very interesting topic. It makes me wonder how he will behave childishly, freely.
Title: Chapter 1 10 Feb 2013 10:32 pm
Reviewer: -ilss- (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi.

    I have just one thing to say about your story:

    AAAAAAWWWWWWWWW this is soooooooo cute.

    Author's Response: Thank you! 
Title: Chapter 1 28 Apr 2012 1:34 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it! I was actually looking for a de-aged Harry but I saw that this was your first so I thought my opinion would probably not hurt and if I hated it, I just wouldn't say anything. I'm adding you as a fave author so I can see if you add more. Thank you.

    Author's Response: awww! Im actually at a lost for words! thank you so much! =)
Title: Chapter 1 26 Feb 2012 3:17 pm
Reviewer: Emily Redbird (Signed) [Report This]
    Of course you should make a sequel!^^ This was a little short, and I'd really like tot know what they got up to during Severus' de-aging.
    Sorry if I made any mistakes in my review, but I'm not a Native speaker:)

    Emily^^

    Author's Response:  I will. =) Its okay. You did fine. lol. English is my first language and I still have trouble with it! LOL. XD
Title: Chapter 1 02 Feb 2012 8:24 pm
Reviewer: elizzza (Signed) [Report This]
    It is very short, but it actually says all that needs to be said. I do like it. A lot of fics are too wordy without actually bringing the story forward. You have managed to say a lot in a few words. Very well done!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! =)

Title: Chapter 1 29 Jan 2012 2:08 pm
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, that was really cute! I'd definitely love a sequel.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I will. =)
Title: Chapter 1 29 Jan 2012 9:32 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this I hope to see maybe a sequil?

    Author's Response: Thank you! Don't worry. You will.=)
Title: Chapter 1 29 Jan 2012 8:26 am
Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed) [Report This]
    The only thing that has me confuse is that Malfoy is blaming Harry (which is normal) when it was Neville's cauldron that exploded. Harry could prove with his memory that Sev had already empty his cauldron.

    Author's Response:

    That could be a good idea. Maybe I should have Neville come in and help as well. ^.^ "Unca Nev!" lol.

Title: Chapter 1 29 Jan 2012 5:38 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww good job!
    I know how you feel because I'm a fairly new author too and I had just posted my very first Severitus story on this site and I was quite nervous!
    But this was quite good and very cute. I wouldn't mind a following one shot, you know to see what the situation developed into. Keep up the good work. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! ^.^ I will. I'm going to write a sequel, but it will be more than a one-shot, from all the other reviews asking for more. =)

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