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Title: Ch 1: A Startling Discovery 24 Oct 2022 9:33 am
Reviewer: J3nnySchmidt (Signed) [Report This]
    Really wish there was more.
Title: Ch 1: A Startling Discovery 25 Feb 2020 10:50 pm
Reviewer: mandancie (Signed) [Report This]
    This is very interesting. I hope that you continue this story soon. :)
Title: Ch 1: A Startling Discovery 07 Aug 2015 3:32 am
Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed) [Report This]
    Need more... So addicted...
Title: Ch 1: A Startling Discovery 17 Mar 2014 6:26 am
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    *sniff sniff* poor harry. you better help him Severus or i'm going to come into this story and kick your ass. this was a really great chapter. i cant wait for the next chapter. thank you for the story. :)
Title: Ch 1: A Startling Discovery 22 Jun 2012 9:37 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    What a fabulous start.
    I'm hooked.
Title: Ch 1: A Startling Discovery 05 Feb 2012 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start but just a few pointers in a spirit of friendly advice.
    Please start a new line when a different person talks in a paragraph. Also I'm afraid a lot of the sayings of especially Vernon are not known to me as an English person and he would not have said them. However a good start thank you
Title: Ch 1: A Startling Discovery 04 Feb 2012 8:06 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    I think you have a good start, but some of the things in this chapter could use a little more development so that they don't feel rushed. Sometimes it is worth an extra sentence here or there to explain things to the reader more in-depth. I like your writing style though and you're doing good!
Title: Ch 1: A Startling Discovery 04 Feb 2012 5:34 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay I'll bite, what happens next?
Title: Ch 1: A Startling Discovery 04 Feb 2012 2:37 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start, though a a better question to ask might be will your reader's be satisfied with Dumbledork's answer!!!!
Title: Ch 1: A Startling Discovery 03 Feb 2012 10:07 pm
Reviewer: nightowllor (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start, can't wait to see where it goes! Keep up the great work! ;)

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