| Title: Chapter 12
| 10 May 2021 7:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Oh no now he knows too! I wonder about the troll thing. No way will harry be running off to save hermione even he can't even see to get there but maybe ron will and harry will want to help Ron.... Eh I think harry's fine without either of them tbh
| Title: Chapter 11
| 10 May 2021 7:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Oh what is he up to now.. meddling old buzzard
Putting dumbledore in his place!
It is a bit ridiculous. I thought it was crazy that snape still took him shopping for school supplies when chances are he can't hear or see to actually participate in any classes. But now it's like really slapping me in the face. Why put the boy through all of this? He can sit at the table and eat yes but after that he goes back in the dungeons until the next mealtime? He can't sleep in the dorms, obviously, and again classes are out right now. Best thing they could've done for him is not even brought up attending hogwarts. Live there with severus yes, befriend draco definitely yes, but there's no harm in postponing at least a semester or a full school year. Doing what's best for the kid yknow
Ooh I wanna know Dumbledores reaction lol hope he choked on the candy. Trying to still manipulate a kid that's already been tortured. I hope magic or potions can give harry some of his sight back at least. I couldn't imagine not having two of the major senses
I like the premise of this story. I do find Severus, Harry and Draco all to be a little out of character though.
I do believe that Severus would care for Harry in a situation like this, but I don't necessarily think he would be so willing to take him in initially, nor do I think he'd know how to act around Harry (or any hurt child).
I also find a Draco Harry friendship to be implausible, especially with Harry being disabled. To be fair though, a lot of people like Draco and I'm not one of those people.
Anyways, not trying to be overly negative. I do enjoy the premise and the attention to the practical details of Harry's injury. Thanks for writing.
| Title: Chapter 8
| 23 Feb 2015 4:47 am
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| Reviewer: A Person on the Internet (Anonymous)
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Cool! I'd been looking for a story that showed Draco in a more positive light without being slash, 'cause nobody but Voldemort is completely bad. I also like how you portrayed Draco's home situation, which could actually have happened in canon. Liking it so far!
Yes! So excited to see more.
Excellent.
| Title: Chapter 24
| 16 Feb 2015 10:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter as usual!
| Title: Chapter 23
| 16 Feb 2015 10:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love the family you are creating here. I don't find Harry OC as he is so brave!
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