Amazing story! I love the relationships between Draco, Harry and Severus. I like the way many of the the staff have rallied around to help Severus care for Harry. Can't wait to see what happens next. Well done!
I Love your story!!! Can't wait wait for the next update.
as for writting style the only thing wrong i see is snape's internal decision making and reasoning on why he is doing what he is doing. a little more detail and deeper reasoning from snape would be pretty good.
you know i feel that i have to comment on some unfairness here. petunia dose after all have good reason to hate magic AND magic people, in at least britain, violate and harm non-magic people has if there were pets or bugs.
after all dont forget that lilly and snape violated petunia with magic.
Wow! Wonderful Chapter!
You certainly know how to pack it full of interesting goings on!
Thanks for the update.
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| Title: Chapter 23
| 31 Mar 2013 11:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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What a place to leave us! Thank you a wonderful chapter and I'm so pleased the story is carrying on!
So happy to see an update to this story. I don't even remember when I last checked on it. I do hope to see another chapter soon. I love a strong and passionate Severus!
| Title: Chapter 23
| 29 Mar 2013 12:52 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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oh more please! thank you
Excellent chapter, I enjoy this story, it just feels like the wait is too long.
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