I just wanted to ask, but how did Harry get his money from Gringotts? Everyone thinks he is dead, including goblins. So how did he get into his vault without rising suspicion?
| Title: Chapter 8
| 23 Oct 2006 10:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Karen (Anonymous)
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I truly love what you've written. You know have a groupie. You asked about eye color. The only one with eyes other than brown was Peter- his eyes i think were watery. pale, blue. Any, Thanks
Ron's are blue I think, Sirius's grey, Remus's grey/amber, Peter's watery blue and James's hazel. :P
| Title: Chapter 8
| 28 May 2006 12:06 am
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| Reviewer: Llewellyn (Anonymous)
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OH! I forgot! I don't know if this is still of use to you but I will answer your questions about the eye colours. Ron: Blue, Sirius: Grey, Remus: Amber, Peter: a watery blue, James: Hazel. I don't know if this is still of use to you, but here it is.
| Title: Chapter 8
| 27 May 2006 11:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Llewellyn (Anonymous)
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Oh! I love this story so much! One thing you might want to watch out for is making Harry completely unbeatable. Make sure he still has some weaknesses to him. This is very important to keep the story interesting. I wonder if Severus will ever find out that Sebastian (oh, I love that name- did you know that it means 'a person of authority') is really Harry? Will he ever find out about the problems in the boy's past? I'll keep on reading. Just so you know, you have several typos so you may want to go back and clean up this story, it is extremely unpolished although the premise is awesome.
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