I hope they are able to escape from the carnival.
|Title: End of the Seventh Month
||20 Jul 2014 9:50 am
|Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
Can't wait till the next chapter. So good. What's the curse about?
aw. Severus does like Harry!
I'm getting more and more into this story. Mina, Harry, and Severus would make a lovely family though there's still time for that! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that, and I liked your comments about Mina/Severus/Harry because I think so too. Thanks for the review!
I'm really enjoying the story as well as the gradual change in Harry and Snape's relationship.
I look forward to reading more soon!
I just found this story and I'm facinated. I like the mystery of the carnival-- especially the dark hint about the hall of mirrors. Especially that it pushed out the carousel as its opposite principle (which just points out how imbalanced everything is). We've gotten bits of Servus's perspective so far, but I'd like to know more about his day and how the carnival is affecting him. Weren't they both attracted to what the carnival had to offer-- I appreciate that Severus is more self-protective and secretive, but it doesn't really flow together that he agreed to this if he doesn't seem to find anything good. We did get some explanation when he thought about how freeing it was not to be a potion master-- I think just a little more of that sort of thing would help.
Author's Response: Sorry for the late reply to your review. I'm glad you like the story and you have a very good point. Though I do plan to show more of Severus' day and such later on, I like the idea of showing more of how the carnival is affecting him. So yeah, I will expand on what I have already put in there. I have already updated, so I will work on putting more of Severus' thoughts into the story on that particular topic. I feel silly for not thinking of it the way you said it, lol. But thanks and thank you for the review, I really apreciate it!
Severus is right - Harry must have a death wish to listen to Ann. Still, boys of that age hate to be called weak or chicken.
Omg! That Ann is crazy!
I wonder if Severus will forbid him to see her. Poor Harry, but thank God that he has Snape to keep him safe and in line, because he is too easily influenced by Ann.
Great chappie. Can't wait to see what happens with Harry's birthday.