Hmmm..i'm very curious about Mina and who is really is.
LOL Severus does not seem very happy, but this could be the chance for Harry and Snape to get to know one another.
Good chappie. Looking forward to seeing what happens next and I want to know what is up with that Hall of Mirrors!
Awesome chapter! Cannot WAIT for the next one;)
I have this horrible feeling that Severus and Harry are in the equivalent of a roach motel. You check in, you don't check out. In fact this is reminiscent of a Twilight Zone or a Outlimits episode.
Great job! Looking forward to more!
I had to laugh when Harry put his hand against the wall & all the carnival lights went off! (Reminded me of when I worked in a furniture store and hit ENTER on the computer, and all the lights in the store went off! Pure coincidence, but it FELT like cause and effect! I KNEW exactly how Harry felt!!!) You have really created an ominous atmosphere that permeates the story as a whole. The most innocuous actions are infused with this surreal tension, like simply eating dinner. Looking forward to the next update! (And wondering if Harry is going sleepwalking with the guard animals wandering loose...)
Your opening chapter is full of intrigue and already feels creepy! The concept of the carnival itself reminds me of one of my fave films, "Something Wicked This Way Comes". It'll be interesting to see how your story develops, and what becomes of the relationship between Snape and Harry in this unusual situation. I think it's very telling that Snape himself got sucked into the carnival, rather than merely dragging Harry away by the scruff of his neck. We'll see...
I admit this whole Carnival thing seems very intriguing...update soon!
Great chapter! Something is very mysterious about this carnival it seems.
So far, so good. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next and what sort of jobs will be assigned to Harry and Severus.
My curriousity is peaked but I get a feeling for some reason that Severus and Harry are in danger from this Carnival family of sorts- why can't Mina remember how long she has been there....
Uh oh...what have the gotten themselves into? Great chapter, I'm hooked!
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