If that don't shock them then nothing will.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 04 Jul 2015 8:00 pm
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| Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous)
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Harry's extra maturity in his return is quite interesting. His compassion does him credit, as it always does, but I especially enjoyed the affect of him growing into himself so suddenly, as Snape and Dumbledore must think. Harry suffered, too, to become who he was at the end of the books, and contrasted to the more diffident Harry of the fourth book, who let himself be swept up in the tournament, he truly must seem like an intruder. Very intriguing!
Oh, why does it stop here? It's so awesome with such potential! I wish there was more, but seeing it's been quite awhile since the last update, it would appear otherwise. Too bad. Love the story! Please update again!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 30 Oct 2013 6:46 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Will this continue? Will Severus and Harry get along?
This is an excellent start - hope you continue
I have a feeling Sev is going to say he doesn't care if he dies or not. I wonder if he has a death wish?
I so not liked that little cliffhanger.
I want to see Severus' and even Dumbledores reaction to what Harry said.
I can see Snapes eyebrow rise and Albus asking him to explain or something like that.
I read this chapter and was like MORE MORE MORRRRRRE and then I forgot where I read this story was it here or Fanfiction and then I was upset that I forgot to follow it that I was like grrr and almost in tears but then I found it and squealed with joy and tracked it instantly.
Can't wait for more update as soon as you can please!!!!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 30 Oct 2012 12:57 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic, thank you so much
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