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Reviews For Bezoar
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for your review... glad you enjoyed. :) misundersnape...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Glad you liked it.
So now you know... Severus was fine, he'll recover. I didn't really think about how so many people would need to know that... haha... (as if I'd have killed him off).
;) Thanks again, misundersnape...
Author's Response: He he... it'll take far more than an ill Snape for Sirius to let go of his distaste for Severus... but at least, despite his behaviour, he does now understand that Severus is putting his life on the line, even if it is while just 'playing' with Pettigrew ;). All the adults now comprehend that they have to keep an eye out for their spy, no matter their personal feelings for him, or his behaviour toward them... Severus is walking a thin line... and he needs someone at all times prepared to catch him should he stumble or fall. The kids too have an insight now that their snarky, someitimes mean, teacher is more human than they first realised... despite his tough facade, he is as vulnerable as anyone, and given the feelings of animosity between the spy and the Order, he actually needs them all to be paying closer attention to the small clues he might be emitting of how he's coping. I'm glad you seem to have 'got' the fic... that makes me happy.
Cheers! misundersnape...
Author's Response: Thank you! I think there is a greater possibility that Severus might have said something if Sirius wasn't there... for sure. Though only, again, if he hadn't been able to get Dumbledore's attention first. It is very lucky for him that the kids had been spying and saw him... otherwise who knows how long before someone found him collapsed in the Library. Because of the Bezoar he might have still been alright, but... maybe not.
Thanks! misundersnape...
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I think the point here is that they all care... despite first appearances. They just needed to learn, that with Severus in particular, they needed to pay closer attention because he wouldn't necessarily ask for help when he needed it, or at least not as overtly as they might have exprected him to... because, of course, of the perception that he wasn't welcome among them. A part of me wants to explore the trio and Severus further... and if I do come up with a more tangible direction, I might add to this at some point. Thanks again. misundersnape...
Great job as usual. Author's Response: Thank you! Just writing this made me kinda feel like continuing... to address the kid's reactions more, to address Severus' feelings more... but I don't know if I have a directiion beyond that. It would probably be a boring chappie... but if I do think of something, I might add to this. We'll see. Thanks again.. misundersnape...
I wish there was a sequel to it. |
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