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Title: Chapter 2 - Golpalott's Laws 13 Mar 2022 7:02 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this.
Title: Chapter 1 - Bezoar 19 Nov 2020 5:35 am
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus. I enjoyed your story thank you.
Title: Chapter 2 - Golpalott's Laws 10 Sep 2018 3:58 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very entertaining story
Title: Chapter 2 - Golpalott's Laws 29 Jun 2017 4:59 pm
Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed) [Report This]
    This was fun, thanks for the read! (~.^)

    Author's Response:

    Hi!

    Thank you for your review... glad you enjoyed. :)

     misundersnape... 

Title: Chapter 2 - Golpalott's Laws 17 Feb 2014 11:38 am
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice to see a second installment to this! I really liked it, great job :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

     

    Glad you liked it.

     

    So now you know... Severus was fine, he'll recover.  I didn't really think about how so many people would need to know that... haha... (as if I'd have killed him off).

     

    ;)  Thanks again,

    misundersnape... 

Title: Chapter 2 - Golpalott's Laws 16 Feb 2014 1:43 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Severus wasn't poisoned by anyone in the Order. They all seemed quite concerned about him when they realized he was poisoned, too. Though Sirius still managed to be a git to him. Really nice story. I could see the members ignoring the ill Snape but then being worried about him when they knew something was wrong.

    Author's Response:

    He he... it'll take far more than an ill Snape for Sirius to let go of his distaste for Severus... but at least, despite his behaviour, he does now understand that Severus is putting his life on the line, even if it is while just 'playing' with Pettigrew ;).  All the adults now comprehend that they have to keep an eye out for their spy, no matter their personal feelings for him, or his behaviour toward them... Severus is walking a thin line... and he needs someone at all times prepared to catch him should he stumble or fall.

     The kids too have an insight now that their snarky, someitimes mean, teacher is more human than they first realised... despite his tough facade, he is as vulnerable as anyone, and given the feelings of animosity between the spy and the Order, he actually needs them all to be paying closer attention to the small clues he might be emitting of how he's coping.

    I'm glad you seem to have 'got' the fic... that makes me happy.

     

    Cheers!

    misundersnape... 

Title: Chapter 1 - Bezoar 16 Feb 2014 1:34 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus. Too proud to let the other Order members know that he was possibly poisoned. I wonder if he would have told anyone if Sirius hadn't been present? Thank goodness the kids were able to get help for him.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    I think there is a greater possibility that Severus might have said something if Sirius wasn't there... for sure.  Though only, again, if he hadn't been able to get Dumbledore's attention first.  It is very lucky for him that the kids had been spying and saw him... otherwise who knows how long before someone found him collapsed in the Library.  Because of the Bezoar he might have still been alright, but... maybe not.

     

    Thanks!

    misundersnape... 

Title: Chapter 2 - Golpalott's Laws 14 Feb 2014 9:29 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    yeah you chose to add one more chapter. I do wish Severus knew that the trio cared enough about him and probably saved his life. Stupid adults.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review!

    I think the point here is that they all care... despite first appearances.  They just needed to learn, that with Severus in particular, they needed to pay closer attention because he wouldn't necessarily ask for help when he needed it, or at least not as overtly as they might have exprected him to... because, of course, of the perception that he wasn't welcome among them.

    A part of me wants to explore the trio and Severus further... and if I do come up with a more tangible direction, I might add to this at some point.

    Thanks again.

    misundersnape... 

Title: Chapter 2 - Golpalott's Laws 14 Feb 2014 6:42 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I would love to read more of this. You should continue it or write a few more chapters. Just something about it, makes me want to read more.

    Great job as usual.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    Just writing this made me kinda feel like continuing... to address the kid's reactions more, to address Severus' feelings more... but I don't know if I have a directiion beyond that.  It would probably be a boring chappie... but if I do think of something, I might add to this.  We'll see.

     Thanks again..

    misundersnape... 

     

Title: Chapter 1 - Bezoar 28 Jan 2014 6:55 pm
Reviewer: Kyoko (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! Showing Snape's weak/vulnerable side, especially to the three is something I really like in fics, because it proves that he is just human as well.

    I wish there was a sequel to it.

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