Mione? God that's sad. Poor Harry. I'm glad Severus and him were able to share some good times they had with their loves.
Author's Response: I'm not telling. Thanks for the review!
*sniffles loudly*
I didn't even know who died and still I got teary eyed (though I sort of felt like she was Luna-esque). And Severus did just right!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad I was able to capture the emotions just right.
Ohh wow, I liked the characterization of both Harry and Severus very much, and the feeling behind the story. How with time one learns to move on without forgetting the things that used to make us love something so dearly and how we learn to love diferently because we cannot replace what we lose. I don't know if I explained myself crearly but I really relate with this plot. Excellent job! I would give you 100 frogs /10 :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It's exactly what I was trying to convey.
This is a very good one shot! Good Luck in the contest!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Very moving! I especially loved that you left hints of who "she" was but never outright said her name. It is a very realistic type scene that a lot of people can relate to.
I am very impressed! Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was trying to be as realistic as possible.
Aw, I like to imagine a future where Harry and Severus can speak so freely to each other, especially about something as private as their grief. This was, in many ways, very sweet. Thanks for sharing! =)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Intesting story! I quite enjoyed it:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: A Life Missing
| 09 May 2012 4:11 am
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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Oh gosh :( A sad little story, but a great one at that. I really like how you danced around who is wife is, and even added Severus into the mix with talking about Lily. I really like this one-shot, and hope to maybe see a sequel or another one in this universe in the future. Thank you for taking the time to write this :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I don't know if I'll continue the story, it was just meant to be a glimpse of Harry's life.
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