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Reviews For Bumbled
Title: Bumbled 05 Oct 2022 12:45 am
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    This was really simple anf really cute. I liked how you started and ended abstractly with the bee. It was nice.
    (Although I do wonder what the heck the bee was doing awake in the middle of the winter.)
Title: Bumbled 10 Jul 2021 6:11 pm
Reviewer: MauoW (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful and so well written loved it!
Title: Bumbled 26 Mar 2019 4:02 pm
Reviewer: MagnificentAndStrange (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a sweet story about Harry's compassionate side, and Snape's as well! Great writing!
Title: Bumbled 13 Dec 2016 9:07 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lovely story.
Title: Bumbled 24 Dec 2013 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lovely story
Title: Bumbled 23 Jan 2013 12:49 am
Reviewer: hoppingpen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! I really wish this wasn't just a one-shot but I guess we can't all get our wishes :)
    Do you have any other similar stories? Usually I like the guardian fics but this one was pleasantly surprising. Thanks!
Title: Bumbled 24 May 2012 2:44 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story, sproutchild! You did a wonderful job showing things from the bee's POV, and I loved how gentle and concerned Harry was with it.

    The interaction between Severus and Harry was great, too! I loved that Severus was seeing Harry with new eyes.

    And I'd love an Antonomasia update too!

    Author's Response: Thank you!! I figured if he was lonely he'd probably befriend anything... next resort was a pet rock :D

    And I think I'd like a new A update too... I'm gonna have time soon to work on that so hopefully in the next month... *my fingers are tentatively crossed ^^*
    Thanks so much for even caring about it at this point ^^ - I'd love anything new from you btw... I think everything you write makes me smile so Im not picky :D

    Hope life's treating you well and thanks! :)
Title: Bumbled 20 May 2012 6:41 am
Reviewer: Tragedy of Fenwick (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I really enjoyed this fic. Your writing is addictive! I love the bumblebee's perspective; it's very poetic. And how very sneaky and brave little Harry was to attempt snatching a cookie from what he presumed to be Snape's tray.

    Very nice story all around. Thanks so much for sharing it with the us! =)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! It probably just sounds poetic because I had to rewrite it so many times to get it right ^^ bee's are hard!  And I cant image a Harry that doesnt have a little bit of sneaky little boy to him ;D

    Thanks so much for reading and reviewing it!!! ^^

Title: Bumbled 19 May 2012 8:45 am
Reviewer: Bil (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the bit from the bee's pov - unusual! Snape's careful investigation of what Harry would do was fun. I liked also how careful and gentle Harry was with the bee.

    Author's Response: Thanks!! It was difficult navigating the bees pov too, I kept humanising it :) And dont you just adore a careful, gentle, cute little Harry? ^^ Thanks again!
Title: Bumbled 19 May 2012 5:44 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, way cute. :) Thanks for sharing.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! ^^

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